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#1

Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

Ich heiße Jonathan (Embarrassing Middle Name)(Last Name). Ich wohne in der Stadt von Madison mit meiner Mutter und Schwester. Ich komme, mit dem Bus oder dem Auto zur schule. Mein Lieblings-fach ist Chior, mag ich nicht wirklich Mathe. Ich finde Deutsch sehr gut. Ich höre gern weichem-rock und pop mit ein kleines klassisch zu. Ich lese gern oft und ich bin auch ein chours Mitglied im Schulmusical. I komme aus New York. Ich wohne in (Number) (Street Name)Straße, Wohnung (Apartment Number). Meine Wohnung ist nett und gemütlich, aber füllen mit furniture.
Meine Mutter heißt Stephanie. Sie kommt aus New York und ist 44 Jahre alt. Sie hört alt und neu R&B Ich finde das blöd. Ihr Geburtstag ist Am 12. April.
Meine Schwester heißt Faith. Sie Ist 10 Jahre alt. Sie tanzt gern oft. Ihr Geburtstag ist März Am 21
Meiner Bruder heißt Michael. Er ist 20 Jahre alt. Er möchte ein enginer sein. Sein Geburtstag ist Dezember Am 12.


I have NEVER met Cheyenne Jackson. I have never hung out with him in his dressing room, he did not tweet me, he never bought me a beverage, and he mostly certainly didn't tickle me. . .that is all.

Updated On: 2/4/06 at 07:59 PM

#2

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

Ist es ihre hausaufgaben?
Nothing precious, plain to see, don't make a fuss over me. Not loud, not soft, but somewhere inbetween. Say sorry, just let it be the word you mean.
#3

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

Es ist ein Buchprojekt. Für zwei Prüfungsgraden. (I tried)

I have NEVER met Cheyenne Jackson. I have never hung out with him in his dressing room, he did not tweet me, he never bought me a beverage, and he mostly certainly didn't tickle me. . .that is all.

Updated On: 2/4/06 at 08:39 PM

#4

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

there are SO many different tenses in there that it hurts me

Ich wohne in der Stadt von Madison, should read
Ich wohne in die Stadt Madison....although In Germany they would just say Ich wohne in Karlsure, Berlin, Koeln, usw.....

Ich komme, mit dem Bus oder dem Auto zur shule. should use the verb fahren, and not kommen........should be Ich fahre....

Ich finde Deutsch sehr gut, should be simply Deutsch gefallt mir.....or Deutsch hat mir gefallen.

furniture in German is "mobel" with an umlaut over the o

A german would never say "Ich wohne in (Number) (Street Name)Straße, Wohnung (Apartment Number)."
He would say "Ich wohne in der KaiserstraBe........they generally would not say the number, apt #, etc.
(but perhaps for the assignment you have to?)

a german would not say "He wants to be an engineer", but rather ' He wants to study Engineering", which would be Er mochte Ingenieurwesen studieren.

hope this helps


It is ridiculous to set a detective story in New York City. New York City is itself a detective story... AGATHA CHRISTIE, Life magazine, May 14, 1956
#5

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

That was AMAZING!! Thank you!! Yeah, I have to list my adress for the project.

I have NEVER met Cheyenne Jackson. I have never hung out with him in his dressing room, he did not tweet me, he never bought me a beverage, and he mostly certainly didn't tickle me. . .that is all.

Updated On: 2/4/06 at 08:47 PM

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re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

(let's just hope I'm right, lol....it's been awhile....German was my minor....)

If you have a teacher who wants you to speak American-German, she may not be thrilled...as what I gave was what most native speakers would use.
It is ridiculous to set a detective story in New York City. New York City is itself a detective story... AGATHA CHRISTIE, Life magazine, May 14, 1956
#7

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

Auf wiedersien, Mein herr...dunno if I even spelled that correctly...
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#8

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

close Millie ;o)

Auf Wiedersehen, mein Herr.
It is ridiculous to set a detective story in New York City. New York City is itself a detective story... AGATHA CHRISTIE, Life magazine, May 14, 1956
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re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

Before I place this in irreversible scrap book form, How would I add the year they were born to their birthdays?
I have NEVER met Cheyenne Jackson. I have never hung out with him in his dressing room, he did not tweet me, he never bought me a beverage, and he mostly certainly didn't tickle me. . .that is all.
#11

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

but I doubt she ever would.....
It is ridiculous to set a detective story in New York City. New York City is itself a detective story... AGATHA CHRISTIE, Life magazine, May 14, 1956
#12

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

I'd probably do, for example, 12 Dezember 1965
In Europe day comes before the month
It is ridiculous to set a detective story in New York City. New York City is itself a detective story... AGATHA CHRISTIE, Life magazine, May 14, 1956
#13

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

Thanks again. I was thinking about minoring in German also. But I'm only an average english grammar student. Would that be a big problem?
I have NEVER met Cheyenne Jackson. I have never hung out with him in his dressing room, he did not tweet me, he never bought me a beverage, and he mostly certainly didn't tickle me. . .that is all.
#14

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

how do you say "reading that gave me a headache"?
O_O i know maybe 7 words in german and one of them is a swear.

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Updated On: 2/4/06 at 09:46 PM

#15

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

it could be soap, you'd have to bone up on the english skills.....


It is ridiculous to set a detective story in New York City. New York City is itself a detective story... AGATHA CHRISTIE, Life magazine, May 14, 1956
#16

re: Anyone feel like proof-reading German?

Nichts ist besser als starkes, dunkles bier.

(From my German 1 notebook)
'Take me out tonight where's there's music and there's people and they're young and alive.'

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