Critique? Comments? Threats?

[defyingonbroadway]

Posted: 6/30/08 at 1:58am

As it explains, I have no training. I know I have trouble sustaining notes. Please don't just say it sucks, tell me why. Thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ab21GV63_s

[supportivemom]

Posted: 6/30/08 at 12:28pm

Sounds a bit nasally and flat at the end of the notes. Also doesn't sound like you are singing from your gut. Voice lessons would definitely help you. It doesn't suck because at least you have the tune. Props for posting though!

[defyingonbroadway]

Posted: 6/30/08 at 4:25pm

Thanks! Singing definitely isn't my strongest point, but I've actually signed up for lessons.

[supportivemom]

Posted: 6/30/08 at 4:55pm

The potential is there for you to improve. It's also important to know how to sell the song. Glad you're taking voice lessons. You'll have to keep posting so we can see your development. Good luck!

[defyingonbroadway]

Posted: 6/30/08 at 5:02pm

Thanks. I hope there is potential, and I think that if I work my hardest I can definitely make improvements. That definitely isn't my best work, since somehow I got into the advanced choir at my school (I'm still in shock, I did it because my friends thought I should and I thought it might be cool). Maybe my teacher is just crazy. Who knows. But I'll definitely post more as I progress.