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Thoughts on this blog post on Broadway Masters? Laura Osnes is our favorite...http://www.broadwaymasters.org/single-post/2016/11/22/5-Ways-Rejection-Can-Turn-Into-Booking-a-Broadway-Gig
Your use of italics or quote marks for titles is inconsistent.
Your bolding sometimes leaves out one letter.
Why do you use caps for emphasis sometimes, but bold other times?
"Below are 5 pieces"
This should be spelled out — five — as it's less than 10.
"it's is not because of your talent"
Delete "is."
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Lizzie, that piece needs a lot more editing that that - keep going!
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Please keep them coming!
BroadwayLive2 said: "Please keep them coming!"
I'll send you my rates if you're serious. But if you're not (and I suspect you're not, or not willing to pay), you'll be able to find someone else to work beyond the free sample service I gave you.
Why doesn't any of this text dropping Laura's name include any actual quotes from her? You have, what, nine paragraphs leading to this video of her, with no quotes from the woman herself.
Laura Osnes talks about how her audition rejection gave her insight into how to better prepare for the next audition...and be available and prepared for when that next (and sometimes better) opportunity arises. For example, [insert quote from Osnes] or [insert random (made up?) story about an unnamed person landing a role in Hamilton.] I was expecting the former there.
Also when I look at this page on my phone there's a dark popup that covers the whole screen that I can't get rid of.
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Thanks for the comments! This wasn't a blog written by Laura, but in reference to the video we included. We hope you enjoyed the content, we made sure it was easier to read. Thanks again for reading!
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I'll definitely consider it!
Liz was just giving you a pop quiz to see how you dealt with her rejection.
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