This is why I say this song doesn't make sense - all those who think it does, read carefully:
Goliath was a giant..
Taught and mean
David was a sweetheart
Squeaky Clean
But it still takes two
To tell that story
So i'll play my part
*****What does this have to do with anything? Is she saying she's Goliath and David is Brooklyn? She just gets finished being a huge bitch to Brooklyn (the entire show,) and by this point you're already uninterested in her character because she's so awful and mean and obnoxious. So she's already shown everyone how heartless and cruel she is - this song tries to say that she wants the audience's pity now? *****
And in all my glory
I'll fly.. like a raven
In a sky of doves
I'll make you love, to hate me
But that's still love
It's still love
*****Is she saying she'll succeed in a world of white people? Why bring race into this, the show isn't about race at all. Race has nothing to do with the fact that she's a bitch and thinks she's more talented than Brooklyn. And in the show, there's only one white person in the show - so she's certainly not "flying" in a sky of white people. It makes no sense. You can love to hate her - which the entire audience already does by now - but according to her, it's still love. Okay, so why sing about it? It's illogical. The song doesn't make sense...I can love to shoot people, but hey, it's still love. I can love to burn houses down...but it's okay, it's still love! Completely wrong.*****
Love is what i want
Love is what i need
You see beneath this suit of armor
I still bleed
I still bleed
*****You want love, and need love - SO STOP BEING SUCH A HEARTLESS BITCH! THE AUDIENCE DOES NOT HAVE YOUR PITY, and this song is just making it worse. Beneath this suit of armor? More like, beneath this trash heap of armor. She still bleeds? What, all the sudden now, after being a raging BITCH to brooklyn, she's hurt? Please. No one buys it.*****
He used to hold me like a flower
Kiss me, oh, so slow
And we talk about forever
But that was long ago
And now forever's just a place
In someone else's story
And though my heart still breaks
I'm gonna find my glory
*****Irrelevant. Who is he? Why are you singing about someone that doesn't love you anymore at this point in the show? Forever's just a place in someone else's story? Who's story, if it's not yours? ITS MIND BOGGLING!*****
The lyricist for BROOKLYN should absolutely never work again, or if he does, he should team up with John Carrafa and they can go do a GREAT show together. It can star Jackie Mason, and they can sing illogical songs and prance around with homeless people and offend everyone in the audience. Maybe they can even have a black man play an ape.
I'm sorry that this is a very childlike rant, but there is no need for people to back up a show that merits no backing, and to say it makes sense, when there isn't one logical thing about it. It makes me crazy.
"If you are going to do something, do it well. And leave something witchy."
-Charlie Manson