I saw the show last night and really loved it. Still, while you're in previews, I would like to suggest a few cuts, ideas.
Overall, I had wished that the musical arrangements could have been more evocative of the 80s. For example, the number that opens up the second act is excellent while the number that opens up the show pales in comparison. Why? Well maybe because it is harmonically more rooted in the music hall tradition, and that's fine, but a different arrangement would make it more exciting. It seemed more obligatory than generating the sense of excitement/suspense that I was hoping for.
Admittedly the show is ballad-heavy, especially in the second act where every main character has their "show stopper" solo, all in a row (with the exception of "Ich Bin Kunst", more on that to follow). If a verse was trimmed from each of these (with the exception of "Il Adore" which is perfect and very moving) you could pick up the pace considerably, probably trimming close to 15 min. off the running time (we got out of there a little after 10:45) and, I feel, would help out the show for the American audiences.
Speaking of "Il Adore"', the use of video projection was brilliant. It makes me think that more of this, in the first act and in the larger production numbers, on screens that flew down over the super-structure would be very welcome in conveying a sense of the 80s: chronilogically correct events of the times, etc. etc.
"Ich Bin Kunst", while off to a great start, fell flat at the end. When the costumed characters entered I felt that a different choreography could have put them to better use. The costumes alone, while stunning, didn't give the ending of the number the punch that I feel was intended, and a little more punch was needed. You could feel it in the audience. A pumped up musical arrangement toward the end wouldn't hurt either. I'm not speaking of Leigh Bowery's coda where the platform recedes upstage, but just before that. Also, this is one number that breaks up the sameness of the ballad-after-ballad format mentioned above.
All in all, it is a great show and I wish you all a tremendous success on Broadway.
All the best,
Patrick Grant
Any great work of art revives and readapts time and space, and the measure of its success is the extent to which it makes you an inhabitant of that world, the extent to which it invites you in and lets you breathe its sTRANGE, special air. - Leonard Bernstein