My problem with the structure of the story/song style of this show is that it is so old that it doesn't fit the experimental nature not only of this show, but of John's life. Throwing a tear-jerking song after his death that is sung by Yoko didn't make me feel anything -- because she was not in a setting, she was commenting -- which removed me from the plot, and removed me from the potential effect of that moment.
Lennon was never into convention, and his show shouldn't be either. Especially convention that is "proven" to work so often that it, in fact, doesn't work anymore because it is cliche.
Again, I WANT this show to do well, and it just isn't theree yet.
The easy fix is this: PLAY...be EXPERIMENTAL...the show should LIVE on that edge between theatre and political commentary. Right now, it has a political soundbyte "stop the war" and nothing more. If the producers and creative team on thiis one want something memorable, they need a HUGE HUGE HUGE HUGE HUGE overhaul of the show...they can't rely on the emotion associated with lennon to take them everywhere they need to go.
"Fundamentalism means never having to say 'I'm wrong.'"
-- unknown