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#26

re: poetry thread

i'm ok at poetry... if anyone has the poetry.com book (the gardens gate... or something like that) my poem is in there! but the page is mislisted!
"Picture "The View," with the wisecracking, sympathetic sweethearts of that ABC television show replaced by a panel of embittered, suffering or enraged Arab women" -the Times review of Black Eyed
#27

re: poetry thread

there once was a kid named Liam
he ran so fast you couldnt see um
he ran around the earth
from the start of his birth
so dont evin tri to be um

-Liam ******* 2005
#28

re: poetry thread

tee-hee. alright- i'm flowing:

there once was a lad named sam,
who read the good book Peter Pan,
he thought he could fly,
up high in the sky,
so he went to the cliff to try...

(we all know what happened then...)
"Picture "The View," with the wisecracking, sympathetic sweethearts of that ABC television show replaced by a panel of embittered, suffering or enraged Arab women" -the Times review of Black Eyed
#30

re: poetry thread

ASPHALT AND ICE

(with humble apologies to Robert Frost)

Some say the world should play on asphalt,
Some say on ice.
From what I've tasted of the asphalt
I think that those who favor it
Must be a little dim of wit.
For those who want to roller skate
The asphalt may be very nice,
But oh so great
Is play on ice.

RIP glebby <3
#31

re: poetry thread

heres another one...its a skeltonic...its a fixed form in which you try to keep the ryhme going as long as you can and still have it make sense...


lemme know what you think



Sore loser

I’m done with this game
It’s just brought me shame
And it’s causing me pain
I’m left out in the rain
There’s nothing to gain
And so much to lose
Don’t make me chose
I’ll just put on my shoes
And walk out the door
I won’t stand anymore
So stop keeping score
The blood starts to pour
From the hole that you bore
In the heart that you tore
But now I’m back on your floor
Because of the lure
That you said you were sore
And only I could cure
But it was all just a lie
That you were staring to die
And now I’m starting to cry
Because life is passing me by
‘Cause everything is so high
And you have a tie
‘Round my heart that can’t fly
And you laugh and you sigh
As you watch me try
With all my strength to pry
Your grasp from my soul
That you almost stole
You dirty old troll
Just leave me be
Why can’t you see
That you’re the one killing me
The tears fall off my chin
As you stick me with pins
But you can wipe off that grin
Because you didn’t win.

One day we'll meet again, On this rocky road of life. But for now just leave me here. I promise I won't shed a tear.
#33

re: poetry thread

Alright, I'll bite.
I'm posting a manipulated version of a villanelle.
I wrote it about 4 years ago...
Looking back on it now, I laugh.
But at the time it meant something to me.
*shrugs*
Go figure.

(I looked up the definition of a villanelle in case anyone is unfamiliar with the form. 'A 19-line poem of fixed form consisting of five tercets and a final quatrain on two rhymes, with the first and third lines of the first tercet repeated alternately as a refrain closing the succeeding stanzas and joined as the final couplet of the quatrain.' The most famous villanelle I can think of is Dylan Thomas' poem "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night")
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Sunburn

When I met you I knew that I should run
away. What would be my decision? Would
I save my eyes or stare into the sun?

Your flames engulf my fingers one by one.
I touch you and they burn like firewood.
When I met you I knew I couldn't run.

I did not realize that you could stun
me, so I spoke with you and understood.
I shut my eyes. I knew you were the sun.

I'm innocent, but don't think I'm a nun.
You make me think it's bad to be so good.
When I see you I know that I should run.

You smile and tease me. Can't you see you've won
me over? What is my reaction? Should
I save my eyes? NO! (stares into the sun...)

Why can't our silly masquerade be done?
You see my face as I pull back my hood.
When I see you I stop; I do not run.
Forget my eyes! I stare into the sun...

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Updated On: 2/14/05 at 07:13 PM

#34

re: poetry thread

that was COOL, floweryfriend!

the villanelle is a difficult form. the gestation period can be quite long! here's my stab ...


MORNING RITUAL

The razor knows its way across my face
It feels resistance from the cells beneath
The night will vanish soon without a trace

One haggard hand gropes in a shaving case
A blade slips from its moldy leather sheath
The razor knows its way across my face

Two fingers crush a battered tube of paste
Spent bristles scrape the tartar from my teeth
The night will vanish soon without a trace

My skin is chalk, the sink digs in my waist
I taste the ice of tile beneath my feet
The razor knows its way across my face

Char circled eyes enveloped in white space
Black whiskered waters swirl the drain with grief
The night has vanished now without a trace

Running at a standstill in a race
Gleaming silver steams the victory wreath
The razor throws its weight across my face
And night is banished now without a trace

RIP glebby <3

Updated On: 2/12/05 at 08:36 PM

#35

re: poetry thread

roses are red
violits are blue
i like pizza
and so do you
#36

re: poetry thread

roses are red
violets are blue
you have a nose
like a B-52.

when i was in the 7th grade a classmate of mine write this poem along with others and sold them to raise money. ha!
RIP glebby <3
#37

re: poetry thread

villanelles are def. my favorite forms ever!!!


hehehe


i've written two, neither one of them are very good, but whatever...


i loved both villanelles that were posted, they were very well written!
One day we'll meet again, On this rocky road of life. But for now just leave me here. I promise I won't shed a tear.
#38

re: poetry thread

we'd love to read yours. it's fun to take a form and see what different people do with it :)
RIP glebby <3
#39

re: poetry thread

queen, they're both great :) thanks for sharing!
RIP glebby <3
#40

re: poetry thread

We had to do a creative project w/ Macbeth...I wrote a poem...

“Drenched in Sin”
*Inspired by William Shakespeare’s Macbeth *where the quotations are taken from**

“Out damned spot” “All the perfumes of Arabia cannot purify this one hand.”

Wash away the sin with the clear, soft purity. My hands are now pure and the sin is forgotten. But then why is the sin
still dirtying my hands?
Tainted hands, tainted soul.
The more I try and wash it from my hands and brain,
the more it is stuck
to my body and soul.

At first-I brushed off the thought simply
Yet, the more the thought sticks to my brain
It is on my body.

Instead of purifying the dirt, the sin is ruining what left is pure.
How can something so simple to erase from my body consume my mind and soul so much?
The water is pure
but I am such the opposite that instead of anything pure purifying me,
I will ruin.

Wash away the blood wash away the guilt with it. A few drops and rubs and I’m clean again.

“Make thick my blood” and make thin my conscience. Make thin the guilt and resignation I will have for this action.
“When we have mark’d with blood those sleepy two”-marked truly with guilt
The evidence is gone but never from me
The blood will be gone, but my guilt will
Stay.


“Blood will have blood”
His loss of blood will cause mine to stir in the brain

“I am in blood
Stepped in so far that, I should wade no more”
We waded in blood for a bit, absorbed the satisfaction of the ocean and now we are sinking deeper and deeper until the salt of the blood ocean stings my eyes and becomes permanent

“Who knew the old man to have so much blood in him?”
Who would have thought that
one little spot
would drench my body and brain and soul

Rosencrantz: "Be happy - if you're not even HAPPY what's so good about surviving? We'll be all right. I suppose we just go on." - from Tom Stoppard's Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead
#41

re: poetry thread

wow thats awsome!

loved the figurative language and the imagry!


~*Devin*~
One day we'll meet again, On this rocky road of life. But for now just leave me here. I promise I won't shed a tear.
#42

re: poetry thread

Wax Tears

The flame dances in the night
As I think of you
Teases my eyes and
Steals my thoughts
As the wax drips down
Forming a small pool
The tears of wax
Come rolling down
The slender candle’s face
Some hardening before
Ever reaching the base
As I watch the candle cry
My thoughts return to you
And all the nights
That I cried
And you
Were always there to dry
The tears before they reached
The tip of my chin and fell
But I have cried
Since you’ve left
And now the tears soak and stain my pillow.

One day we'll meet again, On this rocky road of life. But for now just leave me here. I promise I won't shed a tear.
#43

re: poetry thread

I'll try:

Covered Sin

How am I to appease the 90’s, material girl that sits before me?
That placid, gaudy face always wanting more
I give to you the world
You seem to hate it
Yet you ask for more

Would Madonna tease like you do?
That pureness of white that you wear cannot cover your sins
Not that I would know
I myself never being able to dig deep enough to unlock your concerns
Or is that unhook?

Your tight jeans and flipped hair don’t make you Miss Farrah Fawcett
Though I know you wish to strut with a gun
Why do you need a gun Miss Fawcett when that cruel smile of yours kills just fine?

I try to turn away while you caress your thigh in your vixen way
But I’m not strong enough
Maybe that’s why I’m with you

You proceed to smile, knowing your meticulous plan of pain has worked
And I find myself again under your spell
How do you do it,
And why do I keep falling?
#44

re: poetry thread

Since my computer crashed, all I can find is my OLD work...

I'll post some of it anyway, but it's not very good. I'm not fishing for compliments, I'm just being honest.
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Whirlpool

You melt down into the ocean.
Salt and sand obscure your vision.
I'll draw you in, you think,
but I'm not the rock you're tied to.
No, I won't make you sink
I'm the air, the sky, and the breeze above you.
Wind won't take you from your purpose.
Drop the weight and start to surface.

I starred in a short film called Magnetic Personality. Check it out!

Updated On: 2/14/05 at 11:04 PM

#45

re: poetry thread

This is a work in progress from a long time ago. It was inspired by the story of my favorite song, and thus I would feel weird ever trying to publish it or anything, so I never really finished it. It needs a lot of revision... the rhythm is virtually non-existant at the moment. I'll get around to it eventually.
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ALONE

I shiver and I burn.
I despise the cold night.
I toss and I turn.
I just can’t feel right.
My mind is restless
My thoughts are numb.
This night was a mess.
And love might never come.

The bed is painfully warm as I let out a yawn.
Once more I was played by the game.
Here I am, sitting stiffly on the precipice of dawn.
I know now that they are all the same.
I find myself beside him in this suffocating space.
The scene is one I always fail to recognize.
Underground music and sensual perfume define this familiar place.
I brush the smoky hair back from my eyes.

My soul must be a lonely architect.
I’m sure I’ll see this scheme again another day
I get into my car. I’ve lost my self-respect.
Unwanted, I was taken in anyway.
The dizzy logic swirls until I cannot see.
I don’t remember why I came.
I could’ve slept there, but he won’t miss me.
The pattern remains the same.

I return to the silence of my house before the night is through.
My dingy home’s been silent since half-past ten.
My head is aching and my heart hurts too.
They forgot to leave the outside lights on for me again.
They don’t notice if I forget to call.
My back has footprints; I’m a welcome-mat.
Sometimes I think that I might not exist at all.
I could let warm tears lull me to sleep, but I can’t bring myself to that.

I never think that it feels right to stay.
Somehow I always beat the sun.
I leave the house before the break of day.
There’s no need to wake anyone.
I know the room better than my hand.
I can walk in the dark without them knowing.
I don’t think they would understand.
I won’t make excuses. I keep just going.

My nights are not as painful as the lonely days.
Once again, I’ve fallen for the jerk.
I stay until the afternoon, as always.
(I wish that he would visit me at work.)
The same emotions stick to every guy.
I will forget again about the hurt.
I wish I could feel safe with all these boys nearby.
My stinging wounds are laced with dirt.

I crash and I burn.
My soul is the night.
I toss and I turn.
This will never be right.
My mind is sickly.
My heart is numb.
Rest does not come quickly.
And peace will never come.

I starred in a short film called Magnetic Personality. Check it out!

Updated On: 2/14/05 at 11:09 PM

#46

re: poetry thread

Bright sunny face
You will find me
At the end of the day
I am West
Of everything center

I starred in a short film called Magnetic Personality. Check it out!
#47

re: poetry thread

This was my father's favorite poem:

Invictus

Out of the night that covers me
Black as the pit from pole to pole
I thank whatever Gods may be
For my unconquerable soul

In the fell clutch of Circumstance
I have not winced nor cried aloud
Under the bludgeonings of chance
My head is bloody but unbowed

Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the horror of the shade
And yet the menace of the years
Finds, and shall find me un-afraid.

It matters not how straight the gate
How charged with punishment the scroll
I am the master of my fate
I am the captain of my soul
"I don't really get the ending,all i can go with is when after several months,Judith saw Pat sang,and later she kissed him on the toilet,after that the story back to where Pat went down from the stage after he'd sung,and he went to the italian lady.I just don't get it,what Judith exatcly meant when he kissed Pat that she had seen,and did Pat end up together with The Italian Lady?Please help me,thank u very much!" Quote from someone on IMDB in reference to a movie he/she didn't understand. Such grammar!

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