Unfortunately, this production was a big miss for me. And I have to say, I think there is blame to share amongst much of the creative team involved.
First, I admit, I am not familiar with Mr. David Harrower's work, but I am very surprised this play was given a second production. Besides the mysterious first few minutes (before you know what Una and and Ray's relationship is), the rest of the play is a stagnant, he said/she said account of a sexual encounter that I just don't think the audience cares about. That was certainly the case when I saw the show yesterday. There was almost nothing to endear us to these insufferable characters. I think it would have worked much better if we would have actually been at the encounter between Ray and Una all those years ago...without ruining the the reveal, that would have been so much more dramatic and fascinating to me. The dialogue is also written in a rambling style that makes you wonder if Jeff and Michelle were even getting the lines right or ad libbing most of it.
Although I have immense respect for director Joe Mantello (his work on The Humans this year is really inspired) I think he got lost in Harrower's dialogue and couldn't figure out how to make it active. Jeff and Michelle are literally sitting in a conference room telling their own sides of the story, but in a way that makes it seem like they are performing monologues through most of it...like the other person in the room doesn't matter. This is one of the biggest problems in my opinion....they show doesn't move forward actively once the reveal is known.
Also, and again let me preface, I'm a Michelle Williams fan. I think her work in films like Brokeback Mountain and My Week with Marilyn is stellar; she has the ability to break your heart with one look. But here, she plays Una with such a melodramatic flair it's hard to find an ounce of truth in the performance. She's chosen a very specific voice as well, one that polarizes her from the audience. Again, with the reveal in this play, I think you have to somehow relate to her...without Una's truth, there just isn't much you grab onto in her character. Jeff fairs better here taking a very common man approach to Ray, but the dialogue and direction is not helping him in the slightest.
The set by Scott Pask and the lighting by Brian MacDevitt are subtle and effective...just what they need to be.
Bottom line: I just question what the experience is, or what is the message we supposed to walk away with. This story is not told in a compelling way. I do, however, give Jeff and Michelle kudos for coming to Broadway with a new play (yes it's had an early incarnation, but short lived and not on bway) and using their celebrity to promote a new name in play writing. More celebrities should take their cues from these two instead of only coming in with a Williams or a Miller we've seen dozens of times.