I'm so sorry that I stumped you all grammar-wise. Thank you to bwayondabrain and Popular for deciphering what I was saying. You guys get kudos.
It's just I should've been more attentive to my grammar problems. I did not mean a thing. If I did, it wod hva luked liket his. An nodboy wod undsretnad it thend, right?
Okay, that was intentional. Just playing with you. But other than that, I didn't mean it.
Anyway, according to saschasf, I kinda get the notion that it was 80% good, not PERFECT, but I still hoped it to be at that level.
"How could she just suddenly, completely disappear into thin water?" - The Little Mermaid