I agree.
I thought the writing was pretty mediocre. Not completely incompetent, but a far cry from good. My main issue was more with the acting and direction, which just felt exceedingly amateurish. Lloyd was fine but he was struggling with his lines. In fact, I read on Show-Score that he was on-book for a majority of the short run. he was off-book at my performance, but he was not confident on his lines. Still, he has a great presence onstage, and it was nice to get to see him live for the first time.