This song was better than the joker song previously posted. Both songs seem to be longer than they need to be. I think with a really great orchestrater, the songs could work. Maybe the lyrics need some tweaking, because some of the inflections don't seem to fit the beat. This seems like a good concept, and the explanation of what is happening during this sequence makes it sound like a good concept. Especially the joker song, there is too much repitition. songs, even opening numbers, need a build, which this one is lacking, but probably due to the lack of orchestration. Also, every time whoever is singing sings "shift" I cringe, because they do not sing that word well, but that is criticizing the performer, not the song. Get a really talented singer to sing it, and a great orchestrater to orchestrate it, maybe with lots of cello and some keyboard work like CATS and I would probably like it.
Updated On: 7/21/06 at 08:36 AM