"Merely making the assertion doesn't really help in my understanding."
I was not merely making an assertion. If you want me to go scene by scene, song by song, I can do that. But I think it's a waste of time. I already explained (in detail) how the nature of how the scenes (or skits, really) are presented don't lend themselves to a cohesive piece. What's missing is an underlying theme that has a
real purpose. Even the songs are quite drab and don't always relate to the main idea. Then again, is there a main idea? Is "Marriage" and "Life" specific enough to make us care? I don't know.
For instance, the scene in the basement where they are smoking pot. Funny at first, I suppose. But is it purposeful? What does it add? To me (and, once again, others who have seen the show) it doesn't add anything. Ergo, this specific approach to "story telling" is dry and lacks conciseness.
How else can I help you understand or accept my view?
Updated On: 11/13/05 at 04:58 PM