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Posted: 3/1/10 at 11:22am
Here is a sample cover letter that I would send to an employer. I'm seeking administrative/personal assistant work. My experience would lend itself to an entry level position. I'd just like some constructive feedback on my cover letter. I feel it's a bit unorthodox, but I really like it. As an employer, would you want to interview me?
"Hello!
Having read your ad for the Assistants position, I was compelled to submit myself for what seems like a wonderful challenge for me. I graduated in the spring of 2008 with a BFA in Theatre and moved to New York City in January of 2009. So far, the city and I have had our differences, and I've learned a lot about myself and what the world expects of me. Here are some of the qualities that I have acquired over past years that would lend themselves to being an effective and successful employee in your company.
1) I learn quick- This has always been one of my great strengths. You'll find that I strive to be as independent as I can be. I don't like to be the one constantly asking for help as it slows everyone down. As a result, I've learned to learn quick!
2) I'm meticulous- It's a cliche, but, "do it once, and do it right," is my motto. Taking the extra time now to do things correctly pays dividends in the future.
3) I'm a team player- I care about others in the office, and the company as a whole. As a result, I see my job at the office as a contributor to the greater good.
This may be rather long for a cover letter, but I feel it's important to take time to write a meaningful letter. Please take a look at my resume. You'll see I already have two previous years as an administrative assistant to an esteemed professor at a top university. Hopefully I will hear from you in the future. I look forward to hearing more about the company and the position.
I thank you for your consideration."
Thanks guys!
"Hello!
Having read your ad for the Assistants position, I was compelled to submit myself for what seems like a wonderful challenge for me. I graduated in the spring of 2008 with a BFA in Theatre and moved to New York City in January of 2009. So far, the city and I have had our differences, and I've learned a lot about myself and what the world expects of me. Here are some of the qualities that I have acquired over past years that would lend themselves to being an effective and successful employee in your company.
1) I learn quick- This has always been one of my great strengths. You'll find that I strive to be as independent as I can be. I don't like to be the one constantly asking for help as it slows everyone down. As a result, I've learned to learn quick!
2) I'm meticulous- It's a cliche, but, "do it once, and do it right," is my motto. Taking the extra time now to do things correctly pays dividends in the future.
3) I'm a team player- I care about others in the office, and the company as a whole. As a result, I see my job at the office as a contributor to the greater good.
This may be rather long for a cover letter, but I feel it's important to take time to write a meaningful letter. Please take a look at my resume. You'll see I already have two previous years as an administrative assistant to an esteemed professor at a top university. Hopefully I will hear from you in the future. I look forward to hearing more about the company and the position.
I thank you for your consideration."
Thanks guys!
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