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#2228
Posted: 8/8/06 at 1:28pm
I'm just reading 
. And yes, it's a little unusual with the present tense, but I'd get used to it after a little reading, I'm sure.
But it's well written, so don't worry about Namo; after all he hasn't read it yet, has he?
. And yes, it's a little unusual with the present tense, but I'd get used to it after a little reading, I'm sure. But it's well written, so don't worry about Namo; after all he hasn't read it yet, has he?
#2229
Posted: 8/8/06 at 1:33pm
My second thought: the structure of the sentences is often very similar, you might want to think that over.
How far have you gotten up to now?
How far have you gotten up to now?
#2230
Posted: 8/8/06 at 1:43pm
I just finished chapter 61.
I don't know about the page, because I haven't updated the "Final Draft" folder in a while.
What I usually do is write a 50 or so pages. Then me and Ivan spend a few hours editing them. I'll retype that up, and then paste it on the "Final Draft".
Final Draft is hardly the final draft though.
About the sentence structure, yes, I know. The latter stuff (chapter 61, for example) is more diverse.
That's only the prologue, you know
*wink
I don't know about the page, because I haven't updated the "Final Draft" folder in a while.
What I usually do is write a 50 or so pages. Then me and Ivan spend a few hours editing them. I'll retype that up, and then paste it on the "Final Draft".
Final Draft is hardly the final draft though.
About the sentence structure, yes, I know. The latter stuff (chapter 61, for example) is more diverse.
That's only the prologue, you know
*wink
#2231
Posted: 8/8/06 at 1:46pm
I'm back again!
God, driving 200 km/h is FUN!!!
What's up with Namo? Did his post get deleted?
God, driving 200 km/h is FUN!!!
What's up with Namo? Did his post get deleted?
In the real world the only people who burst into song are the hopelessly deranged...
#2232
Posted: 8/8/06 at 1:48pm
Read my thread about "Novels written in present tense".
He's being a jerk, as usual.
He's being a jerk, as usual.
#2233
Posted: 8/8/06 at 1:48pm
That's quite a big deal already, how many chapters are planned up to now?
Welcome back, Guy, for what reason were you racing with such a pace?
Welcome back, Guy, for what reason were you racing with such a pace?
#2234
Posted: 8/8/06 at 1:48pm
Don't crash.
Suzanne: I never use catalogs. I'd rather go in the store and see all the salespeople groveling and sucking up to you.
Julia: Pardon me, I never knew they were so solicitous at the K-Mart.
#2235
Posted: 8/8/06 at 1:52pm
Well, I have a courier job... And I try my best not to crash
Fiction, I read that thread and I didn't think Namo's post was very offensive... Maybe you overreacted a little?
Fiction, I read that thread and I didn't think Namo's post was very offensive... Maybe you overreacted a little?
In the real world the only people who burst into song are the hopelessly deranged...
#2236
Posted: 8/8/06 at 1:55pm
Hey guy.
I'm not sure yet. In the over all story, ther's still a lot to be said. Most chapters aren't as long as the prologue.
I have an outline, but if something important comes up, I write about it. Most of this draft has been written that way.
I don't even have an ending yet.
I'm not sure yet. In the over all story, ther's still a lot to be said. Most chapters aren't as long as the prologue.
I have an outline, but if something important comes up, I write about it. Most of this draft has been written that way.
I don't even have an ending yet.
#2238
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:00pm
But... you know what's going to happen in the end, right?
In the real world the only people who burst into song are the hopelessly deranged...
#2239
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:09pm
To me finding the right, logical and yet catching ending is about the toughest part of writing a novel.
I myself once started writing a spy novel, but I dropped the writing after a few hundred pages for a lack of time...
I myself once started writing a spy novel, but I dropped the writing after a few hundred pages for a lack of time...
#2240
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:13pm
I know how the short story ended, but the characters are so different now than they were then.
It wouldn't be right.
And this is a purely organic experience. I write whatever comes out. I'm sure the ending will be spectacular, and be the best possible ending.
I'm not going to force anything.
It wouldn't be right.
And this is a purely organic experience. I write whatever comes out. I'm sure the ending will be spectacular, and be the best possible ending.
I'm not going to force anything.
#2241
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:15pm
Where did Jessica disappear to btw.?
She didn't even read my DP-PM... Maybe she was so shocked by Jaily's PM that she threw the computer to the floor by mistake.
She didn't even read my DP-PM... Maybe she was so shocked by Jaily's PM that she threw the computer to the floor by mistake.
In the real world the only people who burst into song are the hopelessly deranged...
#2242
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:16pm
That would be sad and expensive then, after all she was in an internet cafe . Hopefully she didn't hurt anybody...
. Hopefully she didn't hurt anybody...
#2243
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:17pm
Did you get the video about the Dell computer prank?
I hope Jessica's computer is fine.
I hope Jessica's computer is fine.
#2245
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:21pm
God, I can see her, lying on the floor of the internet cafe surrounded by parts of the broken computer, shaking and screaming things like
"THEY TOLD ME WHAT DP MEANS!!!"
Wee, I guess she just ran out of money again... :)
"THEY TOLD ME WHAT DP MEANS!!!"
Wee, I guess she just ran out of money again... :)
In the real world the only people who burst into song are the hopelessly deranged...
#2246
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:37pm
I'm sure, she's at least alive .
Or on the other hand: maybe after finding out what dp is, she just wanted to instantly try it out
One never knows...
. Or on the other hand: maybe after finding out what dp is, she just wanted to instantly try it out
One never knows...
#2247
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:38pm
She'll hate you when she reads that comment!
In the real world the only people who burst into song are the hopelessly deranged...
#2248
Posted: 8/8/06 at 2:41pm
Earlier, I was on break.com looking at all these stupid videos. And then I'd share the really funny ones with Guy.
I guess I didn't send the Dell one. Some guy called into QVC and said that the Dell computers are great for porn. The hosts are quite shocked, but they go right with it.
I guess I didn't send the Dell one. Some guy called into QVC and said that the Dell computers are great for porn. The hosts are quite shocked, but they go right with it.
#2249
Posted: 8/8/06 at 4:05pm
FRANKLIN! That's not exactly the reaction I had when reading the lovely definition...
Honestly I didn't even realize that was physically possible. *shudders*
Actually I was still at work earlier and my boss came in so I had to get off BWW asap.
Honestly I didn't even realize that was physically possible. *shudders*
Actually I was still at work earlier and my boss came in so I had to get off BWW asap.
#2250
Posted: 8/8/06 at 4:06pm
Uh oh. Bosses can be scary. I'm glad I don't have one.
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