Jordan Catalano said: "Just off the top of my head, a few things going that I feel really need to be done to the show would be -
Basically the entire ensemble needs to go. They serve no purpose besides a very few scenes (school, the protest, the party) and them all just showing up to randomly dance and I see themselves into scenes has a very “high school musical, we’ll find a part for everyone” thing to it.
I’d consider cutting the part of the brother. Why does he even exist in this show? His entire purpose is to make the sister feel like she’s not as good as him and for him to say he knows what really happened at the end. He’s a useless character, otherwise really.
Pick an “issue” or two and run with them. Like many people have said, every single social issue doesn’t need to be represented here. And if they want to stick with Mary Jane and the drugs, that needs to be really addressed more. Besides that one incredible “backwards” scene she has and “Uninvited” there’s not much else to her addiction.
The husband singing “Mary Jane” at the hospital needs to be reworked because him standing next to his wife who almost died, saying “What’s the matter Mary Jane, had a hard day?” sounds so condescending and dickish. "
I agree with some of this. Particularly the stuff about the brother. Which for me, would mean just dropping the whole rape storyline. It really took away from the stuff about the mother and daughter, which really should be the main focus, in my opinion. It kind of just added clutter and made us focus on a smaller character who has no influence on anything else going on.
It was good, but it definitely could be so much better.
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