I saw this tonight, and I rather enjoyed myself. It was a little slow to get going, but I found the score quite infectious. I loved the Act 1 closer, and a lot of Eliot's little solos and interactions with Ophelia. I don't think the story is all that sloppy, but felt this production was quite messy. This is the first Encores show I've seen in a long time when the actors have had scripts in hand, and the first time I've EVER seen an Encores show where the actors are literally reading from a script. Clark Johnson, in one of his big speeches, was fumbling all over the place. Also, he's a Emmy-nominated director, but this is his stage acting debut. Why? They couldn't find anyone else? What did he possibly bring to the show that someone else couldn't have done better? Also, another weird thing, Rebecca Naomi-Jones, who I really enjoy, played all the ensemble females roles while there were 2 other female ensemble members who did NOTHING. Why not allow them to do a few of the other solos? I didn't get that. Naomi-Jones was given a prime part of a prostitute and did nothing with the role. It could have been a scene stealer. And one of the other ensemble girls is studying computer science at Fordham.... What was up with this casting? You have some amazing talents up there - um, hello James Earl Jones and Liz McCartney - with a college student who isn't even pursuing acting and someone who is making their stage debut? Huh? Da faq?! Santino was great. He's very charming and I wanted him to push the character just a little bit more. But he stumbled over his lines here and there as well, but otherwise he was great. Skylar I felt was giving me TV acting, which I get because of his current career, but that's a big ass theater and you're giving me these quite little line readings that didn't quite go over. I didn't understand his character at all.
I'd recommend going to hear the infectious score and for the sheer fact that no one will produce this commercially ever. But there are some gems, and I think if they cleaned up the book it could be quite fun. I actually liked the little asides they did towards the beginning of the show and it felt very reminiscent of 30 Rock or Family Guy, and I kind of wish they had kept that going. The directing/design just felt sloppy and uninspired. I couldn't believe this was Michael Grief.