friedrichVT, I thought that was who you meant. I don't know if John Dempsey has had much to do with the show since it left Chicago. I haven't heard his name mentioned. Boublil is also somewhat responsible for the book, although I suspect most of his original English lyrics have been rewritten by now.
I suspect that Boublil also gets a lot of the credit, such as it may be, for the structure of the show's story.
I agree with your observations about many of the lyrics, but these have improved a great deal since Pirate Queen was in Chicago.
To be fair some of the songs, such as "If I Said I Loved You" have always had lovely
poetic lyrics, which makes the more pedestrian ones that much more frustrating.
I also don't agree that Pirate Queen's problems indicate that the sung through musical is a thing of the past. I believe a well written sung through musical could be a great success today, and I'm not certain that Pirate Queen itself won't be a great success in spite of the complaints of critics and theatre afficianados.
"I have got to have some professional music!" - Big Edie