Posted: 4/21/16 at 12:03am
I know it's obnoxious and self-indulgent to start a new thread BUT here I am. :)
I find this musical to be powerful and moving with so much potential to be great. After sitting through such a dark, sad, heartbreaking story, IMHO it's extremely important that the final moments work to fully communicate "what its all about".
Evan meeting Zoe at the bench. I wish this didn't happen at all, but I understand it's a device to get him to come to the orchard. Okay. So he tells her that her parents didn't have to not tell the world that he wrote the letter/did all of the lying. She says, "we all needed it" and "you saved them". I find this kinda bull****. Maybe Zoe should have said "they didn't do it for you... they just needed to try and pick up the pieces to move on with their lives and heal".
HERES THE THING. I get where she is going with this, but it gives Evan too much of an easy out from the MASSIVE, dangerous lying that happened. He could have gotten sued. Yes, he takes responsibility when he finally admits it to the family at the end, but the consequences don't go away. The consequence maybe (among other things) should have been never seeing Zoe or the family again. The lie confession should have been SHOCKING beyond belief for the family.
It would have been much more powerful if the show ended with Evan having the strength to go to the orchard on his own, and find it in HIMSELF to have hope for the future / learn from the life altering events that happened. I felt like this was all happening - until Zoe gave him a nice tied up bow at the end.
Then the all of the main characters come out to sing the finale with him... I wish it was just Evan, alone on the stage like the show's opening, having his moment. Or maybe just the moms. Or maybe JUST his mom.
No, I want into just be Evan.
...also Will Roland's character is insufferable and he plays it too cartoonish for this show. It's like he's in another show...
okay, I have spoken! Thanks for listening.
Updated On: 4/21/16 at 12:03 AM