I saw this yesterday; I've heard there have been a lot of changes this past week.
It's a pretty engaging story and the characters (if sometimes not likable as people) are entertaining to follow.
Each song is about 10% too long and have that sort of Monday Nights New Voices feel to them. If you took most of them out of context and put them in a benefit they'd be perfectly at home. Rachel Bay Jones' solo in Act 2 is the exception, and was my favorite song. The best one in Act 1 is a comedic number (the first scene where Jared and Evan are composing the emails). It needs more of those. The other songs in the score, while pretty, all pretty much blend together.
This show needs the young/not too long audience I saw at Finding Neverland. I can tell that most of the slang and social media references are flying over the heads of their parents and grandparents. But I also appreciated that it didn't seem contrived and that the creative team also engages in this slang and technology, because it didn't hit the weird uncanny valley of language that can happen when you write for much younger characters.
I feel like this show would be great at Second Stage. Circle in the Square also came to mind, but that won't happen for a while.
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