P1: No need for title case in "First National Tour"
P3, S1: Needs comma after her name
P3, S1: No need to capitalize "Nominated"
P3, S2: No need for title case in "First National Tour"
P4, S2: Needs a "of" after "title roles"
P4, S2: Spell out "Les Misérables"
P5, S1: Should be "cast in," not "cast for"
P6, S2: "Number one" according to...? Ratings? People's Choice Awards?
P7: Needs a comma after Janet Dickinson's name
P8: No need to repeat the word "story" in two consecutive sentences
P9: The quote should start in its own paragraph
GENERAL NOTES: Inconsistent use of commas within quotes; inconsistent spelling of Mamma Mia; inconsistent use of quote marks vs. italics
Does the PR firm not have an editor? Or is this BWW's doing?
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