yea it sounds a bit pushed back into your throat, make sure you're breathing and supporting like u're supposed to, and even maybe imagine urself sending it all the way to the wall, so that the neighboring room can hear you - don't do this with ur throat, do it with ur breathing. however how u have ur voice right now is reaaaaalllyyyy nice (and yep, would definetely date you), so this is really maybe to try sounding a bit differently.
what's for sure is try to breathe more deeply, the gasping can be bothersome if they're only judging your singing, and remember to support EVERY SINGLE NOTE in between the hard ones, u dont want to let the easy ones get away either.
ooo here's an audition tip song for you: some enchanted evening, its really pretty and i think you'll sound well with it, i dunno what everyone else thinks, maybe something from anything goes too
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