For Gypsy, I'd have "Some People" take place as Rose follows her father all over the house and finally rushing up the stairs just in time for "goodbye to blueberry pie..." and then she starts packing up stuff, getting the kids, and heading off in their car. I'd want her to belt the last note from the car window as she hauls ass down the road and the camera soars up into the sky. Good idea, but I feel you could actually combine everything from "Goodbye to blueberry pie..." on with the traveling montage where she kidnaps the "newsboys" that follows that scene in the stage version. I see them arriving in L.A. on "...but not Rose!" You telescope the timeline a bit so that it moves the plot along and gets them to L.A. quicker.
I'd cut "Mr. Goldstone." Sondheim would love you, and keeping the first line as dialogue is just the punchline he always had in mind.
I'd make "You Gotta Get A Gimmick" a montage where Louise watches from the wings as each stripper does their specialty to an audience of drooling men. I've always felt that number just didn't work on film as well as it could have. Great instinct. I like it.
Louise's "Let Me Entertain You" should be a montage featuring bits of Rose watching her from the wings and seething and a few clips of Gypsy signing autographs as Rose watches behind her, feeling left out. Rose is not just bitter and left out. Use Louise's banter as she becomes Gypsy that Arthur Laurents wrote for the later revivals, and also include Rose's realization that maybe Louise actually has
some talent, though not what she calls talent. Desperation, turning to pride, turning to grudging admiration, turning to disappointment/feeling left out, turning to bitterness. Rose devolves as Louise evolves.
"Rose's Turn" would involve Rose hallucinating that there's a huge crowd in the theatre watching her. In the first part of the song, maybe she actually goes out into the crowd and sits on a few guys' laps or something. During the "for me"s, I imagine the flash bulbs in the Rose sign start exploding and shattering everywhere. After she finishes, the audience leaps to their feet and throw roses at her. The sounds begins to distort and reverb until you can only hear one person clapping. Rose turns and looks into the wings to find Louise there, clapping. She turns back out to the crowd and sees that the entire theatre is empty. I rather favor John Ellis' concept for the scene, as a strip. He could explain it better than I.
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