I found it to be an incredibly moving story, and Jessica was so earnest in her performance. There was a strong emotion payoff at the end, but I did feel like it took a long time to get there. In some ways, I wish the show were structured more like a cabaret or a one woman show or even a standup set. Blow up the fourth wall...let it just be a storytelling session with song. But that's nitpicky...it's a good piece, and I hope Jessica and her team keep developing it.