We saw it yesterday afternoon for the first time. I liked the music a lot, but I think the book is a mess. The overall story/concept is strong, but so much of the dialogue is cheesy, and parts of it just don't really make sense. For example, Off With His Head -- decent song, but it has NOTHING to do with anything - it's just kind of stuck in there. The whole thing with what I guess was Lewis Carroll was not clear at all.
I get that the whole thing is in Alice's head, but I think THAT concept could be made a lot clearer.
The dancing Alice's at the start make NO sense - they serve no purpose at all. Is Alice (as in our main character) the Alice from the book? On the concept she's related to Alice Liddell - not so any more.
It's very clear that this is in the tradition of The Wizard of Oz - hell, they even reference it - but if so, why not do it correctly and actually SHOW The White Knight as Jack early? The Queen of Hearts is supposed to be the villain because her mother in law is a pain in the ass, but the Queen hardly does anything in the show at all!
I also REALLY dislike the White Rabbit. The character is irritating. The clock thing is inconsistent -- it just seems to turn back whatever is convenient for the plot. The knights turned back, but nothing else? How did that work?
The March Hare suddenly "turns" good, and everyone trusts him? How does that make sense?
The Cat and Caterpillar, after their initial introductions, serve almost no purpose in the plot. Either make them relevant, or get rid of them.
I feel like the line between Alice and Hatter being opposites should have been made much more obvious to the audience right from the start and could have been done easily through costume choices or through some other means of behavior. As it is, it's like "oh, by the way, we're opposites."
Like I said, I did like a lot of the songs, and the performances, for what there is to work with, are pretty strong. I love the concept for the show, but the book needs another going over...
Hi, Shirley Temple Pudding.