So what is the central conflict? If there isn't a conflict (and from you described there isn't one) there isn't a story.
You're best bet is to get it produced SOMEWHERE. Then feedback can be gained and improvements can be made. Trying to get an unknown story, by an unknown writer is near impossible.
Why not try some play festivals? There are many to choose from, and you can submit and produce to multiple ones if your script is accepted. Then you produce some reviews, feedback and you can show producers that "somebody" thought it was good.
If we're not having fun, then why are we doing it?
These are DISCUSSION boards, not mutual admiration boards. Discussion only occurs when we are willing to hear what others are thinking, regardless of whether it is alignment to our own thoughts.