I actually liked the score quite a bit, but found the show to be too long. There was not enough plot for the length; this really needs to be 90 minutes with no intermission.
I saw the workshop production at the Vineyard when Will Chase was still in the show and think it has improved since then. The opening book scene sets up the conflict in a much better fashion than before. The "movie scenes" with Michael Park didn't seem as random and out of place as they did before; I actually saw the connection to what was going on with Al Calderon's character this time.
The main problem is too much time is spent on the boys' journey to the burnt part. Plus the intermission doesn't really have much dramatic purpose. There isn't much suspense for the audience to return and find out what happens.
What made the evening worth it to me were the performances and the score. The guy who played Tennessee in Yank! has an amazing voice, and his duets with Al Calderon's brother show off some wonderful harmonies. If there was a cast recording I think I'd listen to it often, but wouldn't necessary need to go back and see the show again, if that makes any sense.
Marie: Don't be in such a hurry about that pretty little chippy in Frisco.
Tony: Eh, she's a no chip!