I was there tonight and I found the play to be hit or miss, with miss being achieved more than hit, but the one aspect that always hit for me was Jamie Brewer. It took way too long for her character to entire the play, but when she did things finally started clicking.
The play takes place in two different time periods and the stuff in the present (with Brewer, Monk, Blum and Aspillaga) goes over much better than the material set in the past. The biggest problem with the old material is you have two characters worrying and arguing over situations that you know the outcome to based on the scenes in the present. There's no tension when you already know what happens.
There's one sweet short scene in the past near the end, but it's a lot of effort getting there for not much payoff. I'd junk that entire plotline personally and just give us the story in the present.
The dialogue is, well, there's a lot of bicker bicker squabble squabble. It's like "bitch, bitch, bitch, bitch, funny, funny, funny, funny," but two of the funnys were replaced with extra bitches.
Part of me feels like an assh0le to dump on a play that's giving differently abled actors work and bringing to light injustices they face, to praise a work solely on those positions is the very definition of patronizing.
Marie: Don't be in such a hurry about that pretty little chippy in Frisco.
Tony: Eh, she's a no chip!