I saw this last night and was disappointed. I like the actors, but the material annoyed me way too much to get involved.
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My biggest complaint was that the play felt in no way set in the 60s. The dialogue/delivery was so modern that it grated on me. I felt that the only reason it was set in the 60s was to keep newer technology out of the plot. It was like a gentle swirl of anachronistic behavior was folded into the proceedings, and it was very frustrating to me.
I hate poor Bryce Ryness' plot. He did what he could with it, but his character would have felt more at home over with Michael Shannon at The Killer than with these characters in Fly By Night. The whole story line was truly so absurd. He was writing this four act musical that never seemed to end and Patti Murin was taking the experience so seriously. Sure, she seemed exhausted from the rehearsal process, but she never doubted the experience. Was there no one else in the play? It was a musical- was there an orchestra? Where was anyone else involved? This was supposed to open on Broadway (with no previews?); I just couldn't make heads or tails of the tone of this story. Ryness had zero character development to work with, but his manic performance didn't help either.
The love triangle was a complete joke. Adam and Patti didn't have much sexual chemistry, and their story didn't show them very much in love. His proposal came out of nowhere and the relationship quickly went south afterward. The bond was much stronger with Case, but the psychic promised her a great love affair. All they had were a few chance meetings, and they never gave into their passions. We were completely cheated out of seeing their supposedly grand romance. She said she was destined for this mountaintop life before her big fall; she got the fall, but never got to experience the soaring heights beforehand.
I liked some of the melodies, but the songs made very little impact on me or the piece; they seemed to fade out rather quickly. Peter Friedman had the strongest standalone number, but it felt extraneous by that point. I wanted a bigger reveal with that story they kept withholding from us. (Also, why was Adam so mean to his father? There was no explanation for his cold shoulder attitude towards him.)
I will say I really liked Allison Case.
Marie: Don't be in such a hurry about that pretty little chippy in Frisco.
Tony: Eh, she's a no chip!