Jill,
I am honored to have the opportunity to be heard by - and to read - you, the composer of A Tale of Two Cities.
First, I want to honor your process on creating A Tale of Two Cities. Mounting a Broadway production is a daunting task. I have no doubt that your journey was a profound one and I appreciate more than my previous words how powerful and personal your experience must have been.
As for my comments - criticisms - on your work... As I sat watching A Tale of Two Cities I found myself wondering why this work - with all its majesty - wasn't quite gelling for me. I wasn't bored (the biggest sin) and I was definitely engaged and enjoying myself. I did find the performances stellar, and in part I agree with your comment that brilliant performances aren't inspired by mediocre material.
As I saw A Tale of Two Cities alone, at intermission I felt compelled to call a theater friend and give him my initial impressions. I thought by talking with my buddy, I could somehow better clarify both my fascination and disappointment with the work.
This is the gist of my conversation... I told my friend that A Tale of Two Cities was misunderstood. That although I thought the critics fair in the overall assessment, the reasons for their coldness were more complex than you'd gather from just reading the reviews. I felt that the first 2/3 of the first act didn't truly have a "song". The early songs didn't seem to be songs. (How do I explain this?) It was if the characters would begin to express themselves by moving from dialogue into song, yet they never quite got there. Something between recitative and a fully realized composition. There were melodies, but they didn't seem complete. It was like the songs were trimmed before they became songs. Something felt missing.
It was clear to me that although there were similarities between A Tale of Two Cities and Les Miserable that they were written in different forms. I appreciated this, but as A Tale of Two Cities was much closer to being a "traditional" musical, I wanted the songs to soar. Music to fall in love with. It didn't do that for me. I found myself far more captivated by the voices than the magic created when notes combine to touch our very core.
In fact, I thought the piece lost an amazing opportunity by not having a stronger opening number to set the tone of the evening to follow. Initially, everything felt sort of half baked. It was pretty, but not magnificent (hence my "mediocre" comment). At least not until towards the end of the first act. Somewhere about 2/3 - 3/4 through there seemed to be a shift. The characters were allowed to not just sing, but to communicate through the melodies you created for them. I remember thinking why didn't this happen earlier?
The second act did move me, but not enough. The themes of A Tale of Two Cities are huge and powerful and crushing. By the second act either I had become used to your style, or the music had become more cohesive. I believe a little of both. There were some lovely moments, but again I wanted more. I wanted music that would just reach into my soul and devastate me. Everything else about A Tale of Two Cities had that potential.
In the end, I walked away provoked by having seen the show. I wanted to understand better why I liked it and even more so, why I didn't love it. Since that performance I have thought a lot about your show. It has stayed with me and I too am looking forward to some distance and revisiting the material. Please do release a recording as I for one want it in my collection.
I write the above with the utmost respect for you and your talent. Please understand that I truly do honor you, your work and your process. AND, I look forward to your future work.
Best regards,
Scott
Updated On: 11/16/08 at 11:12 AM