#101
Posted: 2/23/10 at 6:35am
Holbee makes a lot of sense! ALW will of course try to counter with the oh-so-acute comment that the first show was a load of "hoakum", but actually it does have dramatic coherence and integrity.
Who knows where this myth has sprung from that Christine and Erik were star-crossed lovers. Clearly he adored her musical talent and to her he was a father-fugure and musical mentor. That this turned into a mutual love would be a trite simplification of the character dynamics.
I truly believe ALW has been struggling to find a story- he has his set of characters but now what?
Personally this is what I'd like to see:
1. Gustave is really Raoul's son, but he is fearful that it could be the Phantom's. Doubts plague him as a result and this might cause the rift between him and Christine.
2. Erik knows the boy is not his son, (he would remember certain pre-requisites that didn't happen). However, by drawing in Gustave, he can keep a little bit of Christine- plus there is the repetition of behaviour of his mentoring Christine, (which adds a pschological credibility). He can re-enact the past by raising a new musical genius and spite his rival Raoul.
3. Christine now also fears "losing" her son to the mephistofeles-type figure of the musical mentor. The boy, unaware of past events, naturally sides with the exotic, exciting phantom over his stifling parents
4. Raoul faces the nightmare of having to fight for a loved one all over again- this time is own son
5. Once more Christine must win over the phantom- get him to be reasonable- and see that music is not more important than love. The old love vs music battle is re-drawn.
6. The phantom, realizing once again that he cannot manipulate people into love, disappears forever, (swearing never ever to appear in another sequel as he goes)
7. Christine, Raoul and Gustave re-find their love for each other
To me, this sequence of events is psychologically grounded, emotional, dramatic, and would not require characters to become the complete opposite of everything the original built.
So there. If you need a decent book writer, you know where to find me! :)
Who knows where this myth has sprung from that Christine and Erik were star-crossed lovers. Clearly he adored her musical talent and to her he was a father-fugure and musical mentor. That this turned into a mutual love would be a trite simplification of the character dynamics.
I truly believe ALW has been struggling to find a story- he has his set of characters but now what?
Personally this is what I'd like to see:
1. Gustave is really Raoul's son, but he is fearful that it could be the Phantom's. Doubts plague him as a result and this might cause the rift between him and Christine.
2. Erik knows the boy is not his son, (he would remember certain pre-requisites that didn't happen). However, by drawing in Gustave, he can keep a little bit of Christine- plus there is the repetition of behaviour of his mentoring Christine, (which adds a pschological credibility). He can re-enact the past by raising a new musical genius and spite his rival Raoul.
3. Christine now also fears "losing" her son to the mephistofeles-type figure of the musical mentor. The boy, unaware of past events, naturally sides with the exotic, exciting phantom over his stifling parents
4. Raoul faces the nightmare of having to fight for a loved one all over again- this time is own son
5. Once more Christine must win over the phantom- get him to be reasonable- and see that music is not more important than love. The old love vs music battle is re-drawn.
6. The phantom, realizing once again that he cannot manipulate people into love, disappears forever, (swearing never ever to appear in another sequel as he goes)
7. Christine, Raoul and Gustave re-find their love for each other
To me, this sequence of events is psychologically grounded, emotional, dramatic, and would not require characters to become the complete opposite of everything the original built.
So there. If you need a decent book writer, you know where to find me! :)