I promise you this isn't snarky.
If you are passionate about writing, the idea needs to come from you. YOU have to care about it, want to explore it, and want to live with it for a while. You need to be sparked by the idea...then all the rest (the tone, the tech, the appropriateness) will come.
Script writing is perhaps the most difficult medium - writing in all dialogue is HAAAAARRRD.
Best of luck to your endeavor.
If we're not having fun, then why are we doing it?
These are DISCUSSION boards, not mutual admiration boards. Discussion only occurs when we are willing to hear what others are thinking, regardless of whether it is alignment to our own thoughts.