(Warning --- Numerous Spoilers!!!)
Saw the show Saturday, 6/25. Let me preface this by stating I am a lifelong fan of Neil Diamond's music. I agree with the general consensus so far. I give the show a solid B.
First the good: Will Swenson is excellent as Neil Diamond. He has the right voice for the part and has down many of Neil's mannerisms. Excellent casting. The songs are (of course) great, and most transfer really well to a musical. The most difficult thing for me was hearing other characters sing Neil's songs when I am most used to Neil singing them himself. But it mostly works (with a single exception mentioned later). The Older Neil casting is also spot on.
The Challenge: The most challenging this about this show is that Neil Diamond didn't have the most interesting life (at least what I took out of it from the show). There just isn't a ton of drama. Not to give too much away, but his story as portrayed just isn't as interesting as say, Tina Turner or even say Michael Jackson. And for that very reason, both those shows are more engaging.
What doesn't work: Comments already have been made about the therapy sessions... I would say, for the most part they do work. What doesn't work for me is they go basically through his whole career (and three wives) and then towards the end of the second act, go back to him as a child. Why go through in chronological order just to go back to the beginning? (SPOILERS). My guess is they (#1) wanted to end the first act with Sweet Caroline (which works wonderfully). If they started off with Neil as a child, Act One would probably be too long. But the real reason I believe they did this was to get "America" towards the end of Act 2. There are multiple problems with this. First of all, by the time they decide to once again delve into Neil's past as a child, the older Neil himself (as well as the audience) are like "What this again?!" It is just too much when it feels like the play should be coming to a conclusion. And when they use the young Neil to finally get to the hit "America", it is only presented as an ensemble piece (instead of Neil singing it). And this my friends is THE big mistake. You can't have the hit song "America" without Neil Diamond (the character) singing it. I'm sure the producers realize this, as they do try to (rightfully) reprise the song during the encore.
But once again, they make the same mistake. They do not allow Neil Diamond to SING America. It is a ensemble piece of only the chorus with the audience and Will's voice just blends in with everyone's. (Granted Sweet Caroline is TOO, but this is the second rendition of the show). Once again, you can't have a Neil Diamond show without having Neil Diamond at least lead and sing SOME of the lyrics of America. And this is where I believe the production blows it. When they bring out Will Swenson (or reveal would be a better way of putting it) and if he went into a full rendition of America, that would have been awesome. But they don't do that.
My solution: Scrap the child Neil part. Act 2 runs long and there is no need to go with it just to get to an ensemble of America. Instead, they can still do their brilliant ending (the ending before the encore is great) without the young Neil bit. They can still have the same ending without having the child Neil.
I would then have the ENCORE with Neil Diamond coming out to lead a FULL rendition of America and then the shortened ensemble piece with Sweet Caroline and the audience.
You can't have a Neil Diamond play without having Neil Diamond sing America. Why on Earth the producers didn't realize this Day 1 is beyond my comprehension. Also, why don't they have Neil Diamond come out draped with the American flag? Have these producers ever actually been to a Neil Diamond concert? Or is it now too political?
Otherwise, this IS a feel good jukebox musical (despite Neil Diamond's sometimes lonely and depressing personal story.) I do think they can fix this up and make it really good. Fixing the issue with "America" would be a good start. The good news is that Will Swenson NAILS it.
Updated On: 6/26/22 at 12:30 AM