I wonder if you were sitting right behind me, Whizzer. (I was in orchestra row M, house left.) That lyric got a huge laugh. But I actually liked the symbolism of it. I thought, though, for the most part - the lyrics were stronger than Don Black usually supplies. Not great. But serviceable.
I see what you're saying about "When I Drive". I was completely enchanted by Jeremy Jordan, though, and got a little lost in the moment.
I'm not sure if I liked the show itself as much as I appreciated the performances. But regardless? I left that theater singing 'Dying Ain't So Bad' to myself. And noticed a few people at the stage door doing the same. I would GLADLY sit through it again.
"I know now that theatre saved my life." - Susan Stroman