Patty, you asked the question I think many reviewers will be asking too: Why go the Good Vibrations route when you could go the Jersey Boys/Beautiful/On Your Feet direction and have a much better show? Yes, it would be paint-by-numbers, but it could at least be respectable, and Nolan would make for a convincing enough Buffett stand-in.
My parents, love Buffett and I grew up listening to his albums all the time. I do like a lot of the songs, but they aren’t inherently theatrical, which presents another problem regardless of whether they went bio-musical or jukebox plotline. 80% of the songs have the same tempo and the lack of variety begins to wear quickly.
Some more lines I thought of:
(Luff mentions having to do a lot of work)
Nolan: Work is a bad word around here. If you say it again I’ll have to wash your mouth out...with tequila!
Howard: Work! Work! Work!
Rema Webb is the owner of the island hotel. She’s informing Luff about the free breakfast buffet (BuffET).
Luff: It’s pronounced “buff-ay”
Webb: No, I think you’re thinking of the singer.
Marie: Don't be in such a hurry about that pretty little chippy in Frisco.
Tony: Eh, she's a no chip!