Posted: 9/10/16 at 5:53am
I think Lin Manuel is not a very talented composer. The background melodies in the rap parts are extremely amateurish (listen to it without the words, it sounds like a highschool project), and most of the sung lines that are supposed to be "catchy" are very uninspired to say the least and often just a bunch of words on 1 note. (when he was 10 his father split...full of it....debt-ridden, etc). 1 note..... or this part: French is following us to revolution there is no more...etc). Seriously? That is not composing. Very boring. Sometimes the last word is 1 note higher or lower. yawn.
Also, the ensemble parts sound like an amateur production, for example "Thomas Jefferson's coming home, times, sung 5 times on the most amateurish melody.
More often than not this show feels like a parody, with far-fetched chorus parts, amateurish transitions, repetitive parodies, too simple melodies, headflips on the last chord of a song, when a word is shouted, preferably the name of a character, and rap voices that sound so posturing/affected to get the message across, to a point that you think they are about to cry when they rap about how insane this kid was, or a sound that is close to someone mentally disabled trying to speak.
But to stay on topic, the compositions are not very good.
If anything, I would say that Lin is a lyricist. He does have some witty word jokes. (I said that last time, it became a past time), so we can assume it happened, haha funny. Things like that. Also not on a professional level yet, but witty at times.
Another point I would like to make is how much this show reminds me of RENT. Especially many of the uninteresting ensemble and chorus parts. Strange pauses in the middle. Like they just made it up, no matter the quality. Like all the voicemail stuff and merry christmas stuff. Strange childish melodies that come out of nowhere, and suddenly the chorus shouts something 5 times. And then a pause and another melodie starts. Like "I want this line to be spoken, sung, rapped, and any melody will do". Bizarre.
And many of the songs, like "What'd I miss", remind me of "La vie boheme" or "Christmas bells". A song like "Say no to this" with that silly rhythm reminds me of "light my candle". The opening song is the title of the show shouted 25 times.
But overall I think RENT is slightly more original in it's melodies and the better show of the 2.