John Adams said: "I apologize if this becomes a double post, but something goofy is going on with the order of the posts. I'll delete if it self-corrects:
Scarywarhol said: "God, those lyrics are hard to get through. Music still sounds great, as does the talent."
For me, I think the missing aspect of the lyrics is 'poetry'. As an example, I compare the simple lyrics of Man of Constant Sorrow (from Oh, Brother Where Art Thou?). Just that one, simple phrase, "I am a man of constant sorrow" conjures a deeper emotional message than simply repeating, "please, don't take him", or "a man's gotta do what a man's gotta do when a man's gotta do what he's got to" over and over. For my tastes, I think the lyrics of this score don't meet the standard of beautifully simple poetry that can be found in many traditional American folk songs and Bluegrass.
Regarding the use of repetition, I was most disappointed in the song, "Please, Don't Take Him". Given the drama of the moment, I found myself thinking, "Honey! Try some new words, 'cause the ones you keep repeating aren't working!" I feel like a mother in this situation might reasonably dig a little deeper in the well...?
I also feel that the use of repetition is too limiting to the story-telling. Do you really want to just stop there? You've said it all? Don't you want to expound, or tell me anything more?
I DO like the use of repetition in, "Another Round". (I mean, I really don't hate the score!)
There's a line where Emily Padgett repeats, "Pour me..., Pour me..." which cleverly sounds like, "Poor me! Poor me!" I wish there was more of that kind of thing. (I don't have a printed copy of the lyrics. Does anyone know if those particular lines are written as, "Poor me"?)
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The lyric is "Pour me."
I think to discredit the entire score based on the two weaker points of it is a little much. I will agree that "A Man's Gotta Do," despite the redundancy of the whole thing, fits perfectly with the character.
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