No disrespect to the actress (because she is great in the role), but I think what this show needs to do is get rid of the fiancee character. The way they dress her and from her opening lines you know they are not going to end up together (and frankly you don't want them to) - she is basically dressed like the fiance in Legal Blonde.
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But more than than - it takes some of the potential from Charlie's character. He would be much more interesting if HE wanted to leave the small town and craved "upward mobility", if he found about the "deal" his dad made directly from the real estate agent - this could lead to a great scene and a more logical place for Soul of a Man. The break-up is pretty meaningless because you never really like her - also the bit with the red shoes never goes nowhere. This would also provide more stage time for the other female role and bring more focus to the "platonic" love story between Lola and Charlie.
(the alternative is to get rid of the other female role and make Charlie and fiance really in love - change her wig - and add scenes of Charlie really trying to make this work and failing, maybe as the factory is succeeding. But this seems like too much at this point).
The other big change they need to make is to move this baby to a US setting - a la Full Monty. I think this show can resonate with a A LOT of tourists from towns in the US that revolve around ONE company supporting much of the population, the recent recession and finally, give the US audience a sense of orientation - how far are the different towns from each other, are they really conservative? The shop can be in New Rochelle, the club in NYC and the fashion show in Hollywood, for example.
Finally, as fun as it is, they need to get rid of the boxing match - it goes nowhere and they should be spending those 10 minutes explaining why Charlie is so stressed, the stakes of the fashion show, why things are not as cheery as they where when the curtain went down in Act 1., etc.).
Just some thoughts. I am excited to see this show again next week and see what has changed.
"Observe how bravely I conceal this dreadful dreadful shame I feel."
Updated On: 10/7/12 at 11:03 PM