I was at the first preview tonight and there's some good stuff going for Fish in the Dark, but there's also room for work to be done, especially in the overly long and unfocused second act.
Act one ran about an hour and played like a two-part Curb Your Enthusiasm season finale. Everyone slowly assembles in a hospital waiting room where Larry David's father (Jerry Adler) has been rushed, fearing that this might be the end. Rita Wilson plays Cheryl, I mean Brenda; Jayne Houdyshell plays his overbearing mother; Ben Shenkman is his Asshole brother; Rosie Perez rounds out the leading players as David's housekeeper with a secret.
Part of the hilarity of CYE was the pacing and slow piling on of crap that would overwhelm David by the end of the episode. The beginning might be slow, but you always knew there was going to be a payoff worth waiting for.
There are certainly big laughs to be found in Fish in the Dark, but that carefully plotted build and climax are sometimes missing. Act two picks up where act one ended, but all the momentum is gone. New threads are picked up and then don't go anywhere. The focus shifts too much and you could feel the audience growing restless as some of the scenes went on too long.
David seemed to be playing himself, or as much of himself as could be found in CYE. If you're a fan of his line delivery and humor then you won't be disappointed. If you're expecting him to break out of his comfort zone and do something new, you won't find it here. Personally I was pleased with his performance, and even when the script was meandering I knew I could count on him to make me chuckle with a gesture or vocal inflection.
The rest of the cast is mostly strong; everyone has a bit or two, but it's not like the characters are particularly fleshed out. The only one who didn't quite work for me was Rosie Perez. She needs some more time to find the rhythms of the dialogue and really go for those laughs.
There was a technical difficulty, and in general the scene changes were slow. Sometimes there were pre-recorded telephone calls to cover the changes and sometimes there was some gimmickry with images projected on the skrim. The calls were funny. The projections were not. David needs to whip up a few more calls during to previews and they'll be fine.
The set is fine, if unremarkable.
Overall I liked it well enough, but didn't love it as much as I thought I would.
Marie: Don't be in such a hurry about that pretty little chippy in Frisco.
Tony: Eh, she's a no chip!