I was there tonight, and kind of enjoyed myself? I mean, it has flaws for days, but I was laughing and entertained. They should have hired an actual book writer. It's cool it was improvised - for whatever reason - but they should have had someone come in and actually flesh out the book a bit more. There were a lot of jokes that just didn't land, but they were funny, just not delivered properly. The two main characters are just so damn dull. The other characters are all quirky and interesting and then you have these 2 boring ass white people. Why not give them some quirk? They dated back in high school. Give me a funny song about their first awkward moments of romance or something.
The music was pretty bland. There were moments of an interesting melody, but mostly it was boring. I thought the opening "Jersey" would be this fun riff on Jersey, but instead, it was very earnest. I wanted them to poke fun at how terrible Jersey is, but it was just kind of there. And the choreography was pretty terrible. They need to up the bass. At a rock musical I want the ground to be thumping, and it all felt very thin.
To speak to sets, I think, Whizzer, you're miss remembering. The other sets were still kept within that hand-drawn look - the jail cell that flies in and the wedding are very much the cartoon look. But, I agree with you, that it didn't work. The costumes weren't over the top, and for the most part the show is pretty earnest, so the cartoon look just didn't work. It's not Hairspray.
I don't know what Ken Davenport did, but the audience was going crazies. Families were leaving smiling, people were whooing and genuinely laughing throughout.
Overall, I think it's worth a rush seat. I think the show is really funny, but for some reason the comedy just didn't quite click. I don't know if that's direction or lack of an actual book, but the pacing felt all over. I thought the show really clicked in the diner scene - I thought the diner guy's song was just brilliant and hilarious and shows what the show could be - whereas I thought the "audition" montage was just weird and could have been really hilarious, but for some reason wasn't - again, terrible choreography. I liked the bad guy a lot, but again, wanted the side-kick to be a little more of a character. Good idea, but needs some fine-tuning.
They should have snatched up that slot at Papermill when Unmasked was cancelled. I think this belongs at New World Stages, but then, who would go see it?