I just got out of this. I thought it was solid, but there's definitely room for improvement if it moves to New York.
Contrary to most of the other commenters, the chorus didn't bother me that much. They had some of the funnier moments of the evening (like when they play the popular girls that flock Alice when she comes back to school), and they filled out some of the vocal arrangements really nicely.
The cast was all around excellent. Paul Alexander Nolan has some really beautiful solos, and Lucy Panush stole the show as Alice's friend Hannah.
Beth's song about the wallpaper was the highlight of the music. It's a truly gut-wrenching moment, and Bryonha Marie Parham knocked it out of the park. There were several of the songs that felt very repetitive, like it was all one song going on for thirty minutes, but when the songs stand out, they really stand out and get you invested.
Probably the biggest thing holding the show back would be it's structure. The way it tells the story is through Alice's thought process, which has worked with other shows, but it robbed this show of a sense of drive. It didn't feel bogged down, but by the time we get to the final number and the lights go down, I was left feeling like there wasn't all that much that was accomplished in the last 100 minutes.
Narrative aside, I think this show has some good bones. If the writer and director can figure out how to give the show more of an arc, I can see this making it to Broadway.