Munk --
Not sure why you're under the impression that what I've written above is a rave review or something. I spend about a half dozen paragraphs -- about half of the review -- detailing the numerous faults, mistakes and shortcomings of the show. Are you bothered that I could still find it an enjoyable experience for the aspects of the show that I thought worked? The music was tuneful, the dancing first rate, the design gorgeous and the singing from the cast was at times astounding, giving me goosebumps -- should I have denied that I did just because several other aspects of the show weren't as thrilling or well put together? I found myself laughing frequently throughout, even at certain jokes that were admittedly cheap, vaudeveille-esque and not very clever -- should I pretend I didn't?
I very often go to late previews which are attended by critics as well and nothing bothers me more than looking over and seeing a critic laughing his head off throughout a show and then panning that show in print the next day. Perhaps, he felt it isn't good for the reputation to admit liking certain shows that he does, but it's patently dishonest and false to lie like that and given the size of some readerships it can potentially do harm to shows which obviously deserve better.
To me, 99% of shows are neither black nor white, but filled with greys, neither all good or all bad and I try to reflect that in my reviews. I have a few hundred words of criticism in that post above to go along with a few hundred words of praise and what I have written I think is fair to the show at this point in its life. I saw a THIRD preview, after all, of a show that has been in development for a couple of years -- it's just getting on its feet and making adjustments to playing in front of a live audience rather than being in workshop (most of this cast did not perform in the Atlanta production).
Perhaps, I have tempered some of my criticisms due to this and avoided blanket negative statements BECAUSE I know changes are being made as we speak. I've also learned that members of creative teams of shows do read my reviews (I have received MANY PMs thanking me for my feedback -- negative and positive), so I do try to be as detailed and constructive with my opinions as possible especially when I comment on an early preview. Simply slamming some aspect of a show is of no use to anyone -- any fool can do that -- I try to suggest how a given moment or aspect can be improved.
You mention the stakes aren't high enough. There's truth in that, but that's a book issue -- there's an imbalance in emphasis in the early establishing scenes and Norman and Griffin have work to do in increasing the tension -- but, for a third preview they at least had the outline of the scenes right. Give them time.
I, as you did, also found Mister's casting out of Nettie muddled and not nearly as effective as it should be (one of many things I listed in need of fixing in my review). This is not very difficult to fix -- it's a staging issue. Griffin has misblocked the scene. It's too far upstage and too many other things are going on at the same time pulling focus from where it needs to be and the musical underscoring is merely distracting when it should be heightening the emotion. With a Hal Prince or a Jack O'Brien in charge, the scene could be fixed in an hour or two in a single rehearsal -- we'll see if Gary Griffin can pull it off.
The majority of the show's problems can be fixed in the next week or two if the director and book writer are on point (and if they aren't they should bring in someone). But, regardless, what's already there is very entertaining -- the talent alone is worth the price of the ticket.
Munk, you just wrote a rave review for MAMMA MIA for chrissakes. You may disagree, but what's on stage at the Broadway, flaws and all, is a hundred times better than that mess at the Winter Garden (wanna talk book issues?), yet you enjoyed it. Why? TALENT. Great talent can make up for a LOT of shortcomings and take a show very far. Audiences can ignore flaws in the writing and staging left and right if the folks on stage are capable of fully engaging them. And for some audiences, that's all they want (there's a reason SMOKEY JOE'S CAFE ran for 5 years and MAMMA MIA will be around for another decade).
Anyway, my impressions above constitute what I would characterize as a Mixed or maybe a Mixed-to-Positive review of the third preview of a show I found quite entertaining, but has the potential of being far more than just that. Let's hope Griffin and company can make the necessary improvements and turn it into the musical that the material deserves.
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Updated On: 11/7/05 at 04:37 PM