I'm late to post (don't lurk around here often these days), but I saw the first preview. Overall, I would agree that it's "a mess," but hopefully not unsalvageable. Some of the songs have potential, including "Let it Burn" and, surprisingly to me, the duet between Nelly and Annie in Act 2. Maybe it was called "Someone to Love?" It was sweet and simple, but really effective. This might have been because it was one of the few numbers that actually allowed these women to relate to each other on a genuine level.
My biggest issue is that this show doesn't really have a plot. If the writers can work on the basic questions (who is the protagonist, what do they want, obstacles, tactics, etc), then there's hope. But, as of the first preview, this is one of those "things happen, then other things happen, then I guess it's over" shows.
The ovation ofter "Let It Burn" was thrilling. It's really a great song. I wish something specific motivated it, though. For example, if Annie didn't want to leave the saloon during the riots, then Nelly could sing "Let It Burn" to convince her that they are more than just the business they built.
Another problem that could become a solution: the marketing blurb and the show don't match up. I love the show the marketing blurb promises - Irish and Black communities coming together, the birth of tap dancing, "what it means to be an American while living through one of the most tumultuous eras in our country’s history," and "when hope and possibility shone bright."
But we start the story when hope and possibility are already kind of over. I would have like to watch these characters build this world a bit (even if it were in a flashback). I would like to know more about their stories prior to where the play begins (how did our two couple meet, what were the obstacles of them getting together). I'd have liked to watch some of the process where the Black and Irish dance styles influence each other. The choreography plays with this a bit, it seemed like a missed opportunity not to show Washington and Owen actively working on new steps together.
And then there are the basic storytelling and plot hole issues, as mentioned by other posters:
Yes, the dance contest is in Act Two. But they already sang/danced the same exact 2 songs in Act 1! I honestly wondered if the team was like "let's put these songs in both acts to see where we like them more." I did not need to hear them this many times. And answering one full song with a second full song was clunky - both times. Besides, it's a DANCE contest, right? So why do they each sing an entire song first? And why does Owen dance again? It would make more sense if they'd both danced and this was a Final Two dance-off.
I also had no clue what Washington's story really was when he had run away. He sang something completely undecipherable and then the other characters approved, so... I mean, I think killing someone who has kidnapped/enslaved you is justified regardless, but I was confused about the plot. Also, Sam finds out that Washington is "wanted" in one scene, then he's around him for a whole other scene without mentioning it. Then, after that, he acts as though he's just heard and is here to kick him out. Just a simple storytelling problem.
I get that the music of Stephen Foster inspired the show, but I was pretty bored by most of it. The original songs had way more potential. I was also confused about the Stephen Foster story in the show, since (much like most of the other stories) there was little payoff. I'm in favor of centering Black characters instead of the white ripoff artist, but it's probably time to kill some of those old darlings and maybe just cut him loose.
I have more opinions, but... I should stop. Despite my criticisms, I do hope it can pull itself together. I'd like to go again later on if I can snag another comp. I'm fascinated by the whole thing.