#26
Posted: 11/3/09 at 1:27am
'Flawed' is an understatement:
Why does Coalhouse, purportedly a musician, but by mid-Act One a guy who seems to care more about his car than anything else, send his girlfriend and child into the woods alone for "safety" but then leaves the car with ruffians while he goes to look for a cop, who was probably going to be both white AND Irish?
Wouldn't he have been able to find the unhelpful police officer faster if he had been driving? Weren't Sarah and the baby safer in the car? Wasn't the car safer with all of them in it, rather then abandoned to the clearly bigoted ruffians (did Coalhouse think they were going to polish it for him)? Was he born under a rock? Or are his actions written to suit the writers' un-thought-through whims?
Are we really supposed to have sympathy for Sarah, who thinks she can approach the POTUS waving her arms like a madwoman (even if the rest of her behavior, i.e. burying live infants, clearly indicates that she is)? This character was too stoopid to live!
And how did 5 black guys and one white one get into the Morgan Library? I can believe that a bunch of anonymous Middle-Eastern guys bought tickets on separate airlines, took them over and flew them into buildings, but I cannot believe that a black man, who is wanted in several states for killing firemen, somehow got into a famous public building and wired it with explosives.
I also can't deal with the Younger Brother character. He is first portrayed as sort of an aimless joke, getting his rocks off fantasizing over a brainless, opportunistic bimbo like Evelyn Nesbitt. Suddenly he's a revolutionary? Why? Is he now horny for Emma Goldman?
And what is the point of Father being chosen to be a hostage negotiator? This is a guy who runs a fireworks company and has a fantasy of being a gentleman explorer and lives in the suburbs. Why didn't they call me to negotiate the hostage situation? At least I live in the city! And then he gets there and discovers that his idiot brother-in-law is part of the gang! Quel surprise! Considering there are only 10 people in America, I'm surprised his father-in-law wasn't there as well!
And why does he switch clothes with Younger Brother? What's the point? All the gang members leave, he leaves, only Coalhouse gets killed. So why make that exchange? Just to have a moment? A moment without any point and therefore without any resonance is just BS.
Why were Evelyn Nesbitt and Houdini even there at all? At least Ford made the car that Coalhouse was willing to die for, and Morgan built the building that Coalhouse was going to blow up to get revenge for his car, and Goldman was there to tempt Younger Brother away from bimbos and into anarchy, and Booker was there to tell Coalhouse to be an accommodating black man--- but what did Nesbitt and Houdini have to do with ANYTHING, except maybe not being smart enough to prevent WWI?
And the wonderment continues:
Am I really supposed to believe that this little kid in New Rochelle predicted the assassination that started WWI? What is the point of this 'metaphor' if it doesn't work on the most fundamental level of reality? If only Houdini had picked up the hint the first dozen or so times the kid happened to by miraculous coincidence cross his path, WWI could have been averted, millions of lives saved, happy ending--
but Houdini just didn't get it! And guess what? Neither does the audience!!!
And of course Father goes down on the Lusitania, thereby sparing his wife, who had enough courage and spunk to raise the child of a black song writer/anarchist and marry an immigrant Jew, but apparently not the guts to divorce her husband in the first place because that would have been unseemly.
Which ultimately proves that, what works on the page doesn't necessarily work (or even make sense) on the stage.
Why does Coalhouse, purportedly a musician, but by mid-Act One a guy who seems to care more about his car than anything else, send his girlfriend and child into the woods alone for "safety" but then leaves the car with ruffians while he goes to look for a cop, who was probably going to be both white AND Irish?
Wouldn't he have been able to find the unhelpful police officer faster if he had been driving? Weren't Sarah and the baby safer in the car? Wasn't the car safer with all of them in it, rather then abandoned to the clearly bigoted ruffians (did Coalhouse think they were going to polish it for him)? Was he born under a rock? Or are his actions written to suit the writers' un-thought-through whims?
Are we really supposed to have sympathy for Sarah, who thinks she can approach the POTUS waving her arms like a madwoman (even if the rest of her behavior, i.e. burying live infants, clearly indicates that she is)? This character was too stoopid to live!
And how did 5 black guys and one white one get into the Morgan Library? I can believe that a bunch of anonymous Middle-Eastern guys bought tickets on separate airlines, took them over and flew them into buildings, but I cannot believe that a black man, who is wanted in several states for killing firemen, somehow got into a famous public building and wired it with explosives.
I also can't deal with the Younger Brother character. He is first portrayed as sort of an aimless joke, getting his rocks off fantasizing over a brainless, opportunistic bimbo like Evelyn Nesbitt. Suddenly he's a revolutionary? Why? Is he now horny for Emma Goldman?
And what is the point of Father being chosen to be a hostage negotiator? This is a guy who runs a fireworks company and has a fantasy of being a gentleman explorer and lives in the suburbs. Why didn't they call me to negotiate the hostage situation? At least I live in the city! And then he gets there and discovers that his idiot brother-in-law is part of the gang! Quel surprise! Considering there are only 10 people in America, I'm surprised his father-in-law wasn't there as well!
And why does he switch clothes with Younger Brother? What's the point? All the gang members leave, he leaves, only Coalhouse gets killed. So why make that exchange? Just to have a moment? A moment without any point and therefore without any resonance is just BS.
Why were Evelyn Nesbitt and Houdini even there at all? At least Ford made the car that Coalhouse was willing to die for, and Morgan built the building that Coalhouse was going to blow up to get revenge for his car, and Goldman was there to tempt Younger Brother away from bimbos and into anarchy, and Booker was there to tell Coalhouse to be an accommodating black man--- but what did Nesbitt and Houdini have to do with ANYTHING, except maybe not being smart enough to prevent WWI?
And the wonderment continues:
Am I really supposed to believe that this little kid in New Rochelle predicted the assassination that started WWI? What is the point of this 'metaphor' if it doesn't work on the most fundamental level of reality? If only Houdini had picked up the hint the first dozen or so times the kid happened to by miraculous coincidence cross his path, WWI could have been averted, millions of lives saved, happy ending--
but Houdini just didn't get it! And guess what? Neither does the audience!!!
And of course Father goes down on the Lusitania, thereby sparing his wife, who had enough courage and spunk to raise the child of a black song writer/anarchist and marry an immigrant Jew, but apparently not the guts to divorce her husband in the first place because that would have been unseemly.
Which ultimately proves that, what works on the page doesn't necessarily work (or even make sense) on the stage.
Updated On: 11/3/09 at 01:27 AM