Continuing to mull the changes, and how much thought has gone into every decision. In looking at original CD, it's clear the first act was top loaded with songs that unavoidably expressed the same sentiments, always wonderfully ("When I'm By Your Side" and "We Share Everything" really offer similar lyrics). The revision creates an arc in the twins' evolution as performers, taking us from "Typical Girl Next Door," Buddy's song, re-purposed with irony, expressing in performance a yearning to be viewed as sweet ingenues, to "Ready to Play," after their legal and emotional liberation, which voices sophisticated sexual longing. Is "Ready to Play" as strong a number as "We Share Everything"? No. But does it serve the show better, ultimately yes*.
And even the decision to keep the twins in the red dresses used for the number for the press conference and the iconic act-closer lends stylistic cohesiveness to the act's arc. In the original they sang "Who Will Love Me As I Am" in stylized charcoal grey dresses, in a muted wash of light. Now, the scarlet gowns seem to suggest: all dressed up, no where to go, no men to go with them.
One could argue that Longbottom's vision was darker, literally, to serve the emotional texture of their plight. Yet the current production literally presents these beautiful young women as emotionally and sexually stranded. Putting the twins' center stage in red simply pulls all of the threads of the first act together with a theatrical shorthand. We can easily bemoan the loss of one of Russell and Krieger's best songs. But the artistry here is so thoughtful, the work so complete.
The show aims to keep building, layering contention as the show biz and romantic opportunities self-present and stall. To that point, moving "Leave Me Alone" until act two allows the number to better serve the plotting, to dramatize the issues women face with the big question overlooked earlier: surgical separation.
Love it or not, this revisal is a remarkable example of play development, honing and reshaping to create the fullest, most satisfying story. This SIDE SHOW never really treads water, it keeps introducing new complications and reversals, and because of its new intricacy, the second half of the show burrows much deeper into the stakes and the tragic resolution. If I still find the first act challenging, I can fully understand every single creative impulse.
I thank Whizzer, who planted seeds for much of what is discussed above in his many thoughtful posts much earlier. I realize I'm underscoring some of what he already stated, particularly about "Ready to Play." I wanted to sum up and add to his observations.
*SPOILER. My one negative thought: If "Ready to Play" had a fresher visual design in its choreography -- the women line up and dance with the men in the chorus late, cleverly, but little is done to enhance the gimmick -- it might have the showstopping appeal of "We Share Everything." The song is decent, but it needs a kind of Michael Bennett/Ron Field explosion somewhere. It doesn't quite land.
"I'm a comedian, but in my spare time, things bother me." Garry Shandling
Updated On: 11/17/14 at 07:06 AM