getatme said: "I was at first preview of this show after hearing so much about it over the past few months and found that I liked it quite a bit, but I didn't love it. Perhaps I let the hype get to me, perhaps it just doesn't fill the Longacre, perhaps it was a little bit of the cast re-finding their footing. I found it to be overall good, but not something I'm raving about the next day.
I liked the score a lot, one of my favorite Yazbeck works, tuneful, catchy, entertaining, and, as always, stylistically specific and clear. Loved the way band members were given the opportunities to sing and join the story at times.
The book is strong, with a bit of an over-reliance on narration that I think is a leftover if this piece starting as a show for Audible. Wish there was a little more showing and a little less telling at times, but that was a minor quibble.
Performances are uniformly strong across the board. Andrew Durand's early scened are energetic and he has such an exciting and odd presence. His physical work for the whole show is very impressive. I also found Jeb Brown to be a phenomenal storyteller leading us through this odd tale and stepping in at various times.
Direction is solid but not overall thrilling. Wish the bandstand moved all the way upstage to widen the playing space or even had multiple sides to become different locations, just something to utilize the stage space a little better. Lighting was very impressive. Sound was a little muddy at times, but that seems to be par for the course at a first preview these days.
It's certainly an odd story, one of those stranger than fiction things, and I think I expected it to be either a little crazier/funnier OR to be a little darker and more intense. It sits in the middle ground, there are some good laughs, there are some darker moments, but I think it could benefit from committing fully to one side or the other.
I do think, though, it gets a little bogged down at times trying to tell youeverythingthis body was put on display for. The one of that stuck out the most to me as being only tangentially related was the runner/Route 66 race. I get it, the body was put on display alongside the race in each city, but considering they don't know for sure that this runner and the body every interacted in any way, it felt like a side quest with very little reward or connection to the overall story, and I think the time could be better served by giving us a song FOR the body about how he feels being put on display around the country or something. I kept waiting for a ghost song that never came.
Overall, solid witha nice, mature first preview audience that didn't scream or cheer for every moment, but I was left feeling a little wanting by the end."
I felt exactly the same way about the narration. I thought it was a really good show overall, but my main critique mirrors yours - especially in the beginning, they relied too heavily on telling rather than showing. I also didn't understand the purpose of the Andy Payne character and song in terms of plot development. This subplot seemed disconnected from the main story and didn't add substantial value to the narrative.