I posted this in the Continuity thread:
I don't think it wants or needs fixing. Take out the absurdities and surreal qualities and you have an extraordinarily boring show -- an insipid love story crossed with a disease of the week movie. We've had enough boring "perfect", "logical" shows -- the Winston scenes and God on a bicycle moments are the only things that save this show from pure mediocrity. Brooks very obviously wants these bizarre elements in the mix. He's not stupid or crazy (well, not clinically anyway) -- this is all part of his vision. Smoothing it all out and making it into yet another other boy meets girl love story is precisely what he DOESN'T want, and good for him. Why be boring when you can be outrageous?
He could cut a few ballads (they all sound the same and none of them do anything to advance the plot), do some rewrites in the book to better establish characters and situations, but frankly, this isn't the kind of show that can bring in a top show doctor and be "fixed." Hiring Tommy Tune or somebody (which would never happen -- Brooks is too much of a control freak) would be a huge mistake. The more a real "pro" director would make cuts to turn this into something more conventional, the worse this show would be. To just have the show be about the love story would be bland and unwatchable.
Now if you want to cut the love story out and make the show just about God's opera, that's a show I might pay to see. Execessive, campy, nonsensical and over the top, it would go down as the most bizarre show in Broadway history. As it stands, interweaving the two plots together makes for quite an entertaining show.
Frankly, at this point, the show is "unfixable" in the traditional sense. They've cast their lot with this vision and they should keep it as is. You could add or subtract a couple of numbers and tighten here and there, but the show is what the show is and the critics are gonna have a field day with it. Mind you, as I said, this isn't a "bad show," but this slate of critics doesn't know what to do with something so completely different from anything they've ever seen before and will likely just trash it. My hope is that at least a few will recognize that the show is quite intentionally surreal and bizarre and while it has many flaws, it's also very entertaining.
"What a story........ everything but the bloodhounds snappin' at her rear end." -- Birdie
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