Posted: 4/17/16 at 2:10am
Saw the show this afternoon with my $20 seats. I feel like a lot of what I would have to say has already been covered. Is the show terrible? No. Is it great? No. I would call it... above average.
What makes me a little sad though is that there came a point in act two, right around the song "Time" I realized how good a plot and book this show actually had, if only they would have just toned things down a bit. It's a simple book and really REALLY would have been stronger with more simple staging. Just having Miles and Winnie talking at the table and then the simple ballet between father and son was a really beautiful moment. Then came the entire chorus to ruin it all. That chorus does that often in this show. Another notable 'who invited them?' moment is in "Top of the World." Why, when you are trying to direct attention up into the tree, do you have so much movement below it? And then the ONE time they WERE called for in Mae's solo number, why are they in their weird ethereal forest folk outfits instead of in some kind of party attire to set the scene to the flashback she described for us just moments before? Why not put them into something to show a bit of a difference in setting and time? Just, confusion all around with them.
Act One was SO short that it was almost jarring when it ended. Nothing had really HAPPENED yet. I would have liked to have maybe seen The Man in the Yellow Suit's number here instead of at the top of act 2. Could add a little time onto the noticeably short act and give some kind of tension to have us thinking about into intermission. It certainly nods to that's the direction we are going into but it's so fast you don't really get a moment to let it sink in before blackout.
Usually shows are looking to trim OFF time. I think this show really could benefit from 10 extra minutes somewhere. Maybe to explain the Man in the Yellow Suit's backstory. Not even explain it better, just explain it AT ALL. From reading the book, I of course know who he is. If I didn't though, man would I have been confused. He just rants that his grandmother told him stories. Does it imply that his grandmother is Miles' wife? Is that Miles grandson? And if not that, then who was his grandmother? HOW did she know about the Tucks to tell him? It's all very unclear, implied, and the resolution of it all very rushed.
The end ballet however was of course lovely. You could feel the emotion in the room and in one case hear it. There was a point during the ballet I was able to hear someone weeping and audibly cry out a distressed "NO!" from the back of the mezzanine. No words but MAN did it really grab your heart and squeeze.