Yero is right. The story, including its ending, is what it is. And perhaps it shouldn't be a musical. But it is.
I wouldn't make it into a musical. Instead of offering real heart this story is 100% manipulation. And as SondheimFan said, it pales next to the two musicals to which it bears striking similarities, 110 and Music Man, both of which, imperfect as they are, have a great deal of heart.
As for improving the show as it is, the cast is very good, the lyrics above average, the production elements satisfactory.
The one thing that could use great improvement is Menken's music which I found repetitive and for all its screaming at the audience to find it rousing (which works - another manipulation, with the help of a good cast), actually a bore.
Updated On: 4/20/12 at 08:17 AM