The biggest critique in all of the reviews was that Casey Nicholaw, over directed the show. There really was no need for the ensemble outside of the ballet at the end. They were mostly shoehorned into production numbers, and simply filled out the sound on the sound on a couple songs. Instead of noticing this Nicholaw had what appeared to be "phantom" dancers throughout several numbers. It should of been directed more in the vein of a She Loves Me or Avenue Q, where its more about the story rather than the production numbers. If he was so keen on the ending Ballet, which I did love, and found an ingenious way to quickly tell the epilogue, would be to cast an older actress who could dance as Winnie, and then double cast mother and nana as the older Winnie's.
My other big problem with the show was that they didn't solve the pedophilia problem of Jesse Tuck. The song Seventeen, feels like a love song, and the fact that Andrew Kennan Bolger was 31, playing 17 against an actual 11 year old in Sarah Charles Lewis, just felt wrong. Yes Kennan Bolger has a baby face, but when your playing against an actual 11 year old, you show your age. Add to that by pushing the books climax up from breaking Mae out of Jail, to simply the confrontation with The Man in the Yellow Suit, it forced the relationship between Winnie and Jesse to the forefront of the plot instead of it being Winnie seeing the world for what it is instead of her idealized version of it.
In a perfect world they would of cut Seventeen or at least moved it to the end of Act two. In my opinion it is this song that changes Jesse and Winnie's relationship from Platonic, to on Winnie's end idealized and romantic and on Jesse's end Lustful, which is a problem when you have a 31 year old playing against an 11 year old. Act one should of been lengthened by 15 minutes, and ended with Everything is Golden including the reprise with him owning the land and walking into the wood. Then they start Act Two with You Can't Trust A Man, which has the Constable and Hugo following The Man Dressed in Yellow into the Wood. As they follow him into the woods they witness The Story of the Man in the Yellow Suit, and arrest Mae in the aftermath. Then as the Tucks lament about what they have to do with Mae in Jail, Miles can sing Time, lamenting about the sorrow the Spring brought him. A song is inserted that depicts the Tucks both planning and actually breaking Mae of of Jail. Then on Tuck's way back to their house Winnie idealizes about possibly drinking from the spring herself, so Angus sings The Wheel to explain why she shouldn't. Then as the Tucks go to flee, Jesse says goodbye by giving her a vile of the water and singing "Seventeen". Then show ends as it currently does, Winnie has the internal struggle over the spring with Everlasting, and then the ballet depicting the rest of her life....