A Sondheim rhyme that bothers me — Page 6
Posted: 10/31/11 at 10:02pm
"...it tastes like...(can't think of a good simile)...well...(changes subject to avoid saying sh*tty, the best thing she can think to call the awful pies, in front of a handsome stranger- despite it being the best thing she can think of)...pity a woman alone..." and then bringing it back to her limited wind, since she's too old to be chasing those quick ****cats like Mrs. Moony...maybe she even changes to a line about pitying a woman like her because he must know she was thinking of an inappropriate word and it's her apology/explanation for being so crass? I don't hate it.
Updated On: 10/31/11 at 10:02 PM
Posted: 10/31/11 at 10:20pm
"An awful debility,
A lessened utility,
A loss of mobility
Is a strong possibility.
In all probability
I'll lose my virility
And you your fertility
And desirability,
And this liability
Of total sterility
Will lead to hostility
And a sense of futility,
So let's act with agility
While we still have facility,
For we'll soon reach senility
And lose the ability"
Just one little note from Professor Guiteau here and my Rhyming 101 lecture-- Sondheim would never generally allow an IDENTITY to replace a proper rhyme if he could help it-- meaning that debility, mobility, possibility, probability, desirability, liability and ability are NONE of them rhymes since the accented syllable starts with the same letter, B.
Proper rhymes aren't absolutely required, I suppose; they're just a lot more fun to hear. Lecture over. There WILL be a quiz.
Posted: 10/31/11 at 11:36pm
No, not if his "fun" makes one cringe.
Posted: 11/1/11 at 2:30am
"In the tea, my Lord, the chrysanthemum tea —
An informal variation on the normal recipe"
That marvelous internal rhyme and the rolling rhythm get me every time.
Gaveston2 - "Mary's diction" is the perfect phrase and I've always liked "fall outta" because it's a great example of how Sondheim can fill a lyric with characterization. It just sounds like Mary, which was what was so great about the '81 version, the characters sounded so distinct. Mary had a great moment at the Polo lounge that went:
"Joe, is it Joe?
You don't remember me,
Mary Flynn? But why remember me
It's so long ago, but I remember it - [I'm fuzzy on this line]
You sure saved my neck
And I should've mailed a check..."
It just sounds so much like Mary, just like Franklin Shepard Inc. sounds like Charley. It kills me that in their efforts to simplify the plot and clarify the characters they essentially scrubbed the entire libretto of character and concept. Merrily was so daring - flawed, yes, but original and exciting - but now it's about as safe as can be.
This goddam show is gonna be the death of me, I swear.
Posted: 11/1/11 at 8:12am
Posted: 11/1/11 at 8:41am
Oh, ageism. Just what this thread needed!
Posted: 11/1/11 at 9:06am
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Updated On: 11/1/11 at 09:06 AM
Posted: 11/1/11 at 9:32am
"The Advantages of Floating in the Middle of the Sea" is gorgeous, poetically structured, lyrically evocative, ingeniously introduces The Reader as an endearing central figure, and makes for a splendidly opulent opening number.
However, the central theme that pre-Perry Japan in its isolation from the world is ahistorically idyllic, enjoys a noble stasis free from internal political and social flux, that "nothing happens here," is, if not offensive, down right ridiculous. An Occicentric point of view completely at odds with the rest of this remarkable musical.
Updated On: 11/1/11 at 09:32 AM
Posted: 11/1/11 at 6:46pm
After all, that was the justification for the isolation policy.
You are right, of course, that all sorts of political, social and economic machinations took place on the islands, but all such chaos was hidden beneath a facade of tranquility and order.
A favorite example of mine: the kabuki (originated by a prostitute) was considered too vulgar for the samurai class. But the latter wanted to enjoy the plays. So somebody created an oversized, cone-shaped hat that became the unofficial "disguise" of samurai warriors attending the theater. The "big-ass hat" made the samurai as invisible to other theatergoers as stage attendants dressed in black, yet prevented unfortunate interactions between the samurai and commoners.
So everyone knew the samurai attended the vulgar theater and everyone knew they did not. Tranquil. Ordered. Ideal.
It would not surprise me in the least to read a shogun or samurai writing about the perfect tranquility of isolated Japan, even as he rode forth to fight in one of the numerous civil wars fought under the Tokugawa shoguns.
And doesn't the rest of the play serve to prove just how fragile--even artificial--that tranquility was?
Updated On: 11/1/11 at 06:46 PM
Posted: 11/1/11 at 6:50pm
I do think they improved it structurally, but I particularly miss the Mary of the original, who seems to survive only in the first (i.e., "last") scene.
(I've also said elsewhere that going backwards will always make the play ironic rather than dramatic. But, ah, that score!)
Posted: 11/1/11 at 7:04pm
Posted: 11/1/11 at 7:20pm
But your basic objection is a good one and can be applied to far too many Western works. SOUTH PACIFIC isn't a particularly egregious example in my mind, but R&H do quite happily leave out the grittier aspects of Pacific Island cultures that Michener documents in his book. No screaming pigs ritually slaughtered on Hammerstein's Bali Ha'i!
Posted: 11/1/11 at 9:25pm
The openignwas one of them, but I finially came around to it for the exact same reasons Gaveston gives, which I think are spot on. Next used to bother me more--I used to get the sense that the feeling from it was kind of a condescending "Look how us Westerners ruined that lovely, delicate Japanese culture". Now I'm more ambivalent on it. Anyone who's spent as long in Japan as I did as a teenaged exchange student (5 monhts) knows that's absolutely not true, and there still is a very vibrant sense of their culture. So I don't think that was the original intention, but I do think some productions treat it that way.
Posted: 11/1/11 at 10:03pm
I certainly agree with you that although the "modernization" and "Westernization" of Japan may have been miraculous, they were also much more limited than Westerners assumed. Surely nowadays everyone realizes that Japan, despite being a close ally, has a culture quite distinct from ours!
Posted: 11/1/11 at 10:38pm
Posted: 11/2/11 at 1:11am
Posted: 11/2/11 at 2:27pm
Most of this discussion has been conducted among Sondheim devotees. (After Eight will want me to note that he is the exception.) We're talking about the exceptions we notice precisely because they are so rare in Sondheim's work.
Posted: 11/2/11 at 2:53pm
Well, since he's already come up once in the thread...
"I would like to add that [Stephen Sondheim] is the greatest lyricist that the English language has ever produced. And that's a fact, not an opinion."
~~ Tom Lehrer
Posted: 11/2/11 at 2:54pm
Posted: 11/2/11 at 3:15pm
henrik, I believe Eric is referring to the original Broadway production, which for many years circulated on VHS among fans and sold for outrageous prices on eBay before the advent of YouTube, where it now exists in full.
http://www.sondheimguide.com/television.html
See first item under "Part One."
But then I'm sure you already knew this.
Updated On: 11/2/11 at 03:15 PM
Posted: 11/2/11 at 8:51pm
Balderdash.
Absolute, ludicrous balderdash.
And here I thought you were an astute judge of theatre.
Another illusion gone.
And also, since you hardly know every language in the world, perhaps you should refrain from commenting on the lyricists in those languages.
Posted: 11/2/11 at 10:04pm
And I was speaking in American terms. Zeami, the great poet of medieval Japanese drama, MIGHT be Sondheim's equal, but the aesthetic principles of each are so different that comparing the two really would be to liken an apple to an orange.
The quality of American lyric writing might be one of the reasons why songs from the Golden Age of the American musical remain popular around the world and why every single foreign scholar I have met considers the American musical our great contribution to world culture.
As for Sondheim, my opinion of his primacy as a lyricist is hardly an obscure opinion.
So responding to my opinion with "balderdash" just makes you sound like an 8-year-old taking a temper tantrum. Do try to take a breath before you pass out.
Posted: 11/2/11 at 10:14pm
"Balderdash" is a sight more an 88-year-old's word rather than an 8-year-old's word.
js
Posted: 11/2/11 at 11:28pm
I'm sure Hawthorne, Poe, Melville, Whitman, James, O'Neill, Williams, Miller, etc. would be interested to hear that.
"As for Sondheim, my opinion of his primacy as a lyricist is hardly an obscure opinion."
And multitudes thought that the earth revolved around the sun. But they were wrong, now, weren't they?
Now we all know it revolves around Stephen Sondheim.
A bit of friendly advice: Try to go easy on hyperbole. It puts you on shaky ground.
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